I like any fic involving Kaku and/or Paulie, so you had me at hello. Er, or rather, you had me at the pairing :P
It hurst to trim stories down ;_; This one doesn't seem to have suffered, though: it reads well, emotions get put across succintly, and yum, Paulie in tight spaces ^___^ Kaku's greater-than-human strength does make it hard to imagine him asking for help, but in this instance, since he's undercover, he can't SHOW his strength too much, and might require assistance within those parameters, so it works. And awww, last sentence...
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Date: 2007-03-22 11:29 pm (UTC)It hurst to trim stories down ;_; This one doesn't seem to have suffered, though: it reads well, emotions get put across succintly, and yum, Paulie in tight spaces ^___^ Kaku's greater-than-human strength does make it hard to imagine him asking for help, but in this instance, since he's undercover, he can't SHOW his strength too much, and might require assistance within those parameters, so it works. And awww, last sentence...