Awwwww, I really hate reading anything that has harm coming to Sanji's arms/hands/fingers/eyebrows, but that was so moving, and I could really feel the sense of hope filtering through at the end there, that determination to come through the other side of tragedy that colours the Straw Hats actions so vividly. Love the way everyone recognises that it's the worst possible thing that could happen, love how there's no dialogue, which just adds to the impact of that stare. The sparks practically zing off the page, that chemistry, the way Zoro communicates so clearly, the way his hold tightens on Sanji's chin. Just soooo wonderful. ♥
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Date: 2007-04-22 11:03 am (UTC)/eyebrows, but that was so moving, and I could really feel the sense of hope filtering through at the end there, that determination to come through the other side of tragedy that colours the Straw Hats actions so vividly. Love the way everyone recognises that it's the worst possible thing that could happen, love how there's no dialogue, which just adds to the impact of that stare. The sparks practically zing off the page, that chemistry, the way Zoro communicates so clearly, the way his hold tightens on Sanji's chin. Just soooo wonderful. ♥