You are correct. English is not my first language, I have poor practice, and I lack a mentor/instructor/beta-reader/ or whatever authority that can critique.
I do believe that you are lost because this drabble won't stand alone without the first part and the notes attached to it. There where some opportunities that where wasted in the first line.
What do you mean about too many wrong words are missing? I appreciate your time and effort though.
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Date: 2009-06-15 06:30 am (UTC)You are correct. English is not my first language, I have poor practice, and I lack a mentor/instructor/beta-reader/ or whatever authority that can critique.
I do believe that you are lost because this drabble won't stand alone without the first part and the notes attached to it. There where some opportunities that where wasted in the first line.
What do you mean about too many wrong words are missing? I appreciate your time and effort though.
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