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onepieceyaoi100Here's my second story. It's fairly different from my first one. *evil grin*
Title: Carve
Rating: PG for squicky-iness
Pairing: Sanji/Zoro-ish
Word Count: 295
Sanji pushed the knife in carefully, breaking skin and drawing
blood. Zoro responded with a noise that expressed both ecstasy and
pain. The cook moved the knife carefully along the skin on the man's
back, being careful not to go too deep. He started moving in a circle,
but one that was destined not to be too exact due to the moving and
twitching muscles under the skin. He smiled as he started the second
curve of the curl. Zoro continued to moan and sigh, enjoying the fresh
pain made by each movement of the knife against his back.
Finally, the cook moved the knife away, admiring his handiwork.
"More," said Zoro in an insistent tone.
"Not now... I need to get started on lunch."
"It can wait."
"No, it can't. And don't whine; you're the one who came in half
an hour before lunch, what did you expect?" The swordsman turned and
glared at him. Sanji sneered. "No. Later... after dinner, ok? I'll
torture you to your heart's content then." Zoro grimaced but turned
back around. Sanji sighed and took his cigarette out of his mouth...
Zoro let out a cry of pain and surprise at the sudden burning
feeling on his shoulder blade. He gritted his teeth, focusing on the
new sensation. Sanji held the fiery cigarette against the other man's
skin until he stopped shaking and sighed with pleasure. "Do you like
that," he asked, surprised at the tremble in his voice.
"Hmm," came the positive reply.
"Well, there'll be more where that came from tonight."
Zoro got up. Retrieving his shirt from the floor, he left the kitchen.
Sanji cleaned the knife and put it away, in its place separate
from his others. He washed his hands and began preparing lunch.
Title: Carve
Rating: PG for squicky-iness
Pairing: Sanji/Zoro-ish
Word Count: 295
Sanji pushed the knife in carefully, breaking skin and drawing
blood. Zoro responded with a noise that expressed both ecstasy and
pain. The cook moved the knife carefully along the skin on the man's
back, being careful not to go too deep. He started moving in a circle,
but one that was destined not to be too exact due to the moving and
twitching muscles under the skin. He smiled as he started the second
curve of the curl. Zoro continued to moan and sigh, enjoying the fresh
pain made by each movement of the knife against his back.
Finally, the cook moved the knife away, admiring his handiwork.
"More," said Zoro in an insistent tone.
"Not now... I need to get started on lunch."
"It can wait."
"No, it can't. And don't whine; you're the one who came in half
an hour before lunch, what did you expect?" The swordsman turned and
glared at him. Sanji sneered. "No. Later... after dinner, ok? I'll
torture you to your heart's content then." Zoro grimaced but turned
back around. Sanji sighed and took his cigarette out of his mouth...
Zoro let out a cry of pain and surprise at the sudden burning
feeling on his shoulder blade. He gritted his teeth, focusing on the
new sensation. Sanji held the fiery cigarette against the other man's
skin until he stopped shaking and sighed with pleasure. "Do you like
that," he asked, surprised at the tremble in his voice.
"Hmm," came the positive reply.
"Well, there'll be more where that came from tonight."
Zoro got up. Retrieving his shirt from the floor, he left the kitchen.
Sanji cleaned the knife and put it away, in its place separate
from his others. He washed his hands and began preparing lunch.
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Date: 2004-11-21 12:35 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-11-21 01:44 am (UTC)Now I need to go write another story so I can post it correctly. ^_~
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Date: 2004-11-21 03:45 am (UTC)As for this drabble.` Um. Eep. Zoro scares me. XD;
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Date: 2004-11-21 05:05 am (UTC)Ah! Done.
I also edited "Map"... I double-spaced between the paragraphs, since there's no way to indent (now I see why ya'll do that. ^_^).
Heh. I read some of the stuff in the Archives, and came across "Desert Games" by dethorats (On May 26th '04, if you're curious). It got me thinking about masochist!Zoro... and I gotta say, I rather like the idea... *more evil laughter*
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Date: 2004-11-21 06:52 am (UTC)Heh... Yeah. It also explains why he keeps fighting even with massive, life-threatening injuries... ^_^
Aww, thanks! I'm kinda into writing S&M (pretty mild stuff, mostly), and after reading "Desert Games", this came to me.
BTW, you can guess that Sanji's making a curl like his eyebrow, right? I didn't really have time to explain that in less than 300 words...
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Date: 2004-11-21 01:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-11-21 04:38 pm (UTC)Thanks! I'm glad you like my stuff. ^_^
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Date: 2004-11-21 08:14 pm (UTC)My only criticism is to be skeptical of whether Zoro would -let- Sanji mark his back if he wasn't absolutely sure he wouldn't scar. He -does- make a big deal about the shame of a swordsman with a scarred back when he fights Mihawk.
Otherwise a lovely piece. X3 *grins*
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Date: 2004-11-21 10:36 pm (UTC)Ain't is grand?
Hmmm... good point.
My logic in using his back is, he'd not want the others to see. His arms are uncovered, so that's out, and he considers his chest off-limits since that's where Mihawk scarred him. So... his back and legs are about the only places left.
Maybe I should move it elsewhere, though?
"Lovely"? That's an... interesting way to describe an S&M fic... ^_^
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Date: 2004-11-23 05:09 am (UTC)Me likey. O_O *drools*
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Date: 2004-11-23 08:35 am (UTC)Thanks!
I wasn't sure how people would react, but it doesn't looks like I need to have worried. And I posted a sweet one right before, so you know I'm not a total freak... ^_^
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Date: 2004-11-23 07:28 am (UTC)(I see you read Desert Games...did you happen to catch Weakness? It's a Mihawk/Zoro thing that involves the whole cutting aspect as well.)
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Date: 2004-11-23 08:52 am (UTC)Thanks!
And now you've gotten me into it... AH!
Yeah... I don't see Luffy.. uh... indulging him in that manner...
No... Was it another of yours?
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Date: 2004-11-24 07:48 am (UTC)http://www.livejournal.com/community/onepieceyaoi100/52021.html#cutid3
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Date: 2004-11-25 12:52 am (UTC)Oh, nice. I also found a longer story you did; the one where Zoro and Mihawk go to the hotel... Wowza... O_O ^_^