[identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Surfaces
Rating: PG
Pairing: Mihawk/Zoro (squint!)
Word Count: 298
Note: I wrote this about Mihawk. Because I love him.



Mihawk presses his seal firmly into the dollop of red wax and efficiently seals the envelope. He picks it up and looks at it closely, as if still seeing its tucked away contents in the faint glow of the dwindling candlelight. Satisfied, he rises from his wooden desk, and places the envelope within the safe hidden along the far wall of his bedchamber.

His affairs are now neatly in order; his wishes transcribed to be executed whenever death comes for him.

And it is coming, of that he is certain.

The thought, as strange as the effect may seem, etches a wistful smile upon his thin careful lips. Despite the lateness of the hour, he does not retire to bed, but instead, returns to his desk. He leans back against the velvet-cushioned embrace of the chair, and his eyes, once again catching the light from the nearby candle, burn brightly their eerie gold.

His fingertip traces the mostly smooth surface of the desktop. He thinks about storms and about the hunt. He thinks of youth, goals, and impertinence. He thinks about a moment of recognition, the arc of his sword, the surface of a deck stained red.

His finger finds what it has been seeking across the desktop, and and it pauses, before slowly tracing the cracked raise section of uneven surface with sensuous care.

He thinks of the deep scar formed across the proud stretch of chest, about the heart hidden beneath; its sometimes erratic beat. He closes his eyes and imagines that it calls to him, like a beacon, or a song, or like destiny.

His hand stills, and he lifts it carefully from the wooden raise. He pinches the wick of the candle, burned low but not finished, and goes to sleep patiently in the shadows.

Date: 2004-11-28 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com
He thinks of the deep scar formed across the proud stretch of chest

(thud)
Nice story. ^_^

Date: 2004-11-28 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inu-neko.livejournal.com
Aaw, I don't want Mihawk to die. T__T Oh wait, this is OP, no one dies in the present. ^_^; At least he will be defeated by teh very sexy hands of Zoro, ooh, kill me again babyyyy. Uh, I need to stop drinking apple cider. ^_______^;

Date: 2004-11-28 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com
Oh wait, this is OP, no one dies in the present.

Doesn't Zoro kill people? Or do you just mean no one we know and/or care about?

ooh, kill me again babyyyy.

O_O
Wow, even the living dead love One Piece. ^_^

Uh, I need to stop drinking apple cider.

Yes. Yes, you do. ^_^

Date: 2004-11-28 07:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
Oh *purr*. I really love the voice of this drabble, it's very smooth, reads very nicely.

Date: 2004-11-28 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
My addiction to Zoro is only somewhat stronger than my addiction to Mihawk... (Sanji's in there somewhere too... hmmm.... *pauses to think about /that/ one*) you've fed both nicely, thank you. ^_^ (Mmmm... Mihawk.... XD)

Written very well, as always. ^_~

Date: 2004-11-30 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
*cackles* I know, but it'd still be fun. Wait- I'm posting tonight... the bad dialogue has already been started. *giggles* (Yes, I know its bad, but it makes me laugh)

Date: 2004-11-30 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com
I've been thinking about how much I would secretly love to read a story featuring a love triangle between those three.

I just wrote a drabble about it for you. I'll post it as soon as I'm done here. ^_^

Date: 2004-11-28 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-naye320.livejournal.com
This is really lovely, the way it's written... fascinating.

Date: 2004-11-30 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com
Heh, I love that dark attractive blood-strength-death fetish those two have going.

Date: 2004-11-30 08:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] dethorats
I really like this. I don't think I've seen much from Mihawk's perspective and you did an excellent job. The descriptions are nice and everything here just flows.

Date: 2004-11-30 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
Did I comment on this on ff.net? I think I did...great job again anyway. What lovely wording. I love all your work.

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