Mihawk

Nov. 29th, 2004 10:22 pm
[identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Mihawk
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sanji/Zoro/Mihawk
Word Count: 252



I run my fingers across the broad span of my lover's chest, feeling the valleys and ridges made by muscles and scars. Especially that scar. I move further down, to his legs, exploring the valleys and ridges there. These scars are mine, made in the heat of passion, or to satisfy his desire for pain. I touch one I'm particularly fond of that rests on his hip; I kiss it gently, making him moan. Then I trail kisses slowly up his chest.

He's never let me cut his chest. His arms I can understand, and his face. Not vanity, but fear of discovery; visible wounds would be noticed by our crew mates. But his chest? Well, really, I understand the reason for that, too. I still recall, watching as Zoro stood up and faced that man, the one with eyes like a hawk, and left his life in the man's hands. Mihawk spared him, and left him with the scar that now serves as his inspiration, his motivation.

He's gone now, probably back in the Grand Line, cutting down pirates with that sword, the same one that made the mark on my lover's chest. And yet, he's never gone, really. The mark is there, keeping his memory fresh in Zoro's mind, and making the area off limits to his lover who's here, right now, and everyday. For that area belongs to that man with the eyes like a hawk, the man who has a stronger hold on my lover than I ever will.

Date: 2004-11-30 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadeprince.livejournal.com
That... was so fucking depressing. o_o

Beautiful, but gawd, my stomach hurts for Sanji now. *whimper*

Date: 2004-11-30 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com
Well, who needs the chest when you can have the ass, right?

...sorry, I mean, nice work. ^^
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Date: 2004-11-30 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
Oh! The Angst!!! ^_^

I really liked this! Very vivid images and descriptions. Nice and sexy. Thank you SO MUCH for writing this!!!!!

Date: 2004-11-30 07:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
Poor, poor angsty Sanji. Always second to Zoro's ambition ... T_T

Nicely done!

Date: 2004-12-01 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
Hey, where'd you get the image for your icon?

Ah, that's Ludwig from "Meine Liebe". Pretty, if frivolous, new anime. Check it out, if only for the pretty boys in mind-bogglingly hot period costumes ^^

Date: 2004-12-02 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
Ahhh, it's really really new, but I haven't heard anything about it coming to the US.

As it is, you can get ahold of the fansubs by bittorrent from http://shi-fa.cjb.net/

Date: 2004-11-30 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
That was… marvelous. The feel and overall flow of this is just wonderful. Not quite angst, but… a sort of yearning. You painted this in a shade of longing so perfectly it seems almost effortless. Beautiful job, seriously. I’m impressed. I must say, I particularly liked Sanji’s description of Zoro’s fight with Mihawk- or the end of it at least (the fight, not the description). Superb. ^_^

Date: 2004-12-01 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaoi-rulz.livejournal.com
YAY FOR DEPRESSING STUFFS!!!!!

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