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[slender-one.livejournal.com]

Title: In a fog
Rating: R
Word Count: 285
Pairing: Zoro/Sanji
Topic: Mist

Back in Alabasta. A story about the man who didn't peep over the wall.

In a fog

When the Strawhats arrived in the Royal baths Zoro was determined to ignore Sanji’s slender body. He didn’t want to be caught gawking.

He had to concentrate on something else not to be distracted. Therefore, when Chopper came to ask him to scratch his back he agreed immediately.

He was doing great until the blond asked to leer at the girls.

What surprised Zoro the most was the speed with which Chopper joined the pervert crew.

Alone, he couldn’t help but stare at the cook rushing toward the wall, towel hanging low around his hips. Zoro swallowed.

He lowered his hands and shook his head. He had to get a grip!

Moreover since their arrival, the baths steam had thickened and he was wrapped in a delicious moist heat... it was like being in a cloud, a cloud that surrounded him and affected his whole body.

Shielded from view he relaxed a little and decided to indulge himself a little longer in the cook’s sleek curves contemplation.

He was already hard ... he shook his head once more in despair: the blond which he could not tear his eyes off and the fluffy cloud prevented him to regain his composure.

Damn cook! And that fucking enveloping haze didn’t help... it was so smooth, feeling like silk against his skin. The swordsman suppressed a moan.

Suddenly Vivi’s screaming voice rang in his ears. He stood up at once to dive into the nearby fountain. Safe from view he glanced toward the place he stood earlier. The cloud had unexpectedly dissipated… that was close!

A few meters from the baths a man smoking two cigars smiled. Party’s over, it was time to go back to the ship.

Comments

[rose-n-steel.livejournal.com]

Yea! I wanted to write SOMETHING for the 3 new prompts, but was hitting a writer's brick wall (After a lifelong grand total of 2 fics...). How could I have forgotten the steamy baths of Alabasta! Thanks for bringing back that nose-bleed!^-^

[slender-one.livejournal.com]

Oi ! Thanks for your comment ! At the beginning i wasn't really inspired by mist, but i often think about the prompts in my tiny bathroom... it helped this once !
Come on, i guess there's a challenge extension, i'd love to read another of your "habit" drabble series ;)

[summer-tempests.livejournal.com]

Oooh this is a great take on the mist prompt! This has definite sauna atmosphere and delicious Zoro lust, which which is always wonderful!

I'm just slightly confused about the second-to-last two sentences, are you implying that Smokey was not only spying on the Strawhats in the baths but that he was wrapped around Zoro during his loss of compsure? If so that's such a nice, kinky idea.

Thank you for taking the time to write this; it's always a pleasure to read about naked Zoro.

[slender-one.livejournal.com]

Hey Summer_tempest !

And yes, Smoker is actively involved in this story. Your comment made me laugh cause I couldn't make up my mind on wich pairing i should put in the introduction...i didn't put ZoroxSmoker to keep up the suspense actually ;)

Thanks for your comments