[identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Meant to finish this idea before I left Friday, but I didn’t have time. Got some really bad news last night that had me up ‘till around 4am, though…. So I decided to use the insomnia for something useful.

Title: “Closet Uke”
Rating: PG
Word Count: 244
Pairing: SanZo



The first time it was luck, plain and simple. Sanji had caught him when his guard was down, just drunk enough not to know what was happening ‘til it was too late- until he was trapped. Then he was too lethargic to escape his bonds, but not so far gone that he didn't feel what was happening; and the other man took his time. For all that the cook faltered and tripped over himself with women, he had been surprisingly confident- sure of every move, every touch, every moan he wrenched from the swordsman's throat.

And he was good.

Too good, perhaps- because Zoro never got that drunk again; made a point to never get caught again, too weak to defend himself- and yet, here he was; sprawled out at the blonde's mercy- helplessly bound. Willingly, some part of him knew, even if he couldn’t admit it to himself.

Oh, he'd snarl and fight- but he knew once he let it get this far, he was truly at the other man's mercy, and that disturbed him a little, when he let himself think about it. Because knowing he could trust the bastard with power over him, excited him. Allowing someone else to dominate him, letting them have control, was something he never though would happen- let alone with the shit-cook.

But when Sanji moved his hips just so, and touched him like that... well, he could stop thinking about it for a while longer.

Date: 2004-12-06 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com
First off, about the bad new: Man, I'm sorry... {{{lady_karasu}}} I hope you're ok.
About the story: Innnteresting... it's not uncommon for strong, domineering people to like to relinquish control every now and then. Maybe Zoro's one of those types, at least with someone he can trust (even if he won't admit it). ^_^

Date: 2004-12-07 12:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com
huggles* Thanks. Seeing your post put me in a better mood yesterday, so you helped.

Oh, good.
I looked at the link you gave below... I've had loved ones die, and it sucks. Especially when it's sudden, like this was.
{{{lady_karasu}}}

Then I had to cheer up Rin, who I'm staying with- and it helped that you helped. (That made sense, right? yay!) ^_^

Yeah, actually, it does make sense. Glad I was able to help. ^_^

Ya, that's the direction I was going with this. I had started thinking about something I ran across back in another fandom back in the day, when someone had gone off on a tangent about how if you have to be in charge, or in control (in this case, of himself) all the time, it'll burn you out-

Indeed. Maybe that's why Zoro sleeps so much. He does push himself pretty hard.

and that while they may have to be drug to it kicking and screaming (snarling and fighting, in this case) some people /need/ to be able to give up control now and then.

Yeah. But yeah, some people have a heard time relinquishing it. In Zoro's case, I think at least part of it would be that he won't admit that he even needs it, never mind who he'd give it up to.

The thought superimposed itself over Zoro in my head and I had a gigglefest picturing it, so it had to be written. ^_^

Yay! ^_^

*laughs* It has to be really messing with his mind (or pride at least) that he allows it with Sanji, though... *giggles*

Yeah... though I wonder if he'd want to allow it with anyone. Luffy, maybe?

Date: 2004-12-06 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com
Whatever happened, hope it's better now.

Evil (yet sexy!) seme Sanji. I love Zoro's submissive side, and you've really made it work and believable and sexy. Whee.

Date: 2004-12-06 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com
Eeep. *hugs*

Well, they say that people who have jobs/lives where they need a lot of self control enjoy the release of being submissive. Or sommat. It's hot.
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Date: 2004-12-06 03:44 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
about the news, I'm sorry, wish I could do more...

about the story, mmmmm. especially like that Zoro can trust Sanji with such domination...messing with his head indeed, and his heart, too ^__^

Date: 2004-12-06 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
I'm so sorry about the news. There are horrible people out there... I hope you feel better and find some peace soon. <3

But wow... in the mean time, this was incredibly sexy. SO SEXY. Gah... yeah. Zoro likes it. And the romantic in me LOVES the trust part. A fanfic is never as good as it could be if it doesn't have true caring in it.

Date: 2004-12-07 01:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-naye320.livejournal.com
I'm terribly sorry to hear the bad news... I hope you're in a position to offer and get all the support needed now, so you don't have to go through this alone. My heart goes out to you!

...and I can't just not comment on this, because - wow! I am full of love for this, SO interesting, and fun, and HOT! Great idea, great writing, and - oh, yes. Yay for Zoro bondage indeed! ^___^

Date: 2004-12-07 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
This was very well-done! I'm not usually into bondage fics (no particular reason), but this one worked on many levels. It addressed Zoro's need to have control, and the unexpected satisfaction felt when he finds someone that he trusts enough to surrender it to. That's very romantic!

And, I am also saddened to hear what you are going through. I wish you and your loved ones the very best. *hugs*

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