[identity profile] fire-tears.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Leave a Mark
Topic: none
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Smoker/Ace
Word Count: 192

It's more of a sense than a smell, really. Unlike most pirates, Ace isn't greasy or filthy and doesn't think that one bath every four months is an acceptable ratio. But it's still there, especially obvious when the smoke slides over heated skin, the sense of other people having been this close, gotten this far during the spaces inbetween their infrequent meetings.

It's not like it's a surprise. It's not like it's even really much of an issue (really, it's not). Ace is a pirate, and pirates are better known for their kind and caring ways than their ability to be monogamous. It probably doesn't help that Ace walks around in nothing but boots and low-riding shorts. Hell, it got his attention, and he's never been one to pay undue mind to such things. Stands to reason that it'd get other people's attention, and Ace... well, Ace likes attention.

But recently he's been noticing that Ace's visits have been a tiny bit more frequent than usual. And when they're entwined and it's heated and it's good and all defences are down, lately all he can sense is cinders and smoke.

Date: 2005-02-01 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyperactivator.livejournal.com
Ace x Smoker is my guiltiest pleasure. So thank you!

Date: 2005-02-01 06:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airairo.livejournal.com
That was delicious. Cinders and smoke. Mmmm.

Guh. I just love this pairing. Great work on this. ^^

Date: 2005-02-01 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadeprince.livejournal.com
Oh fuck yes. Perfect. Lovely. You have my undying adoration for these little SmokerXAce tidbits you occasionally drop. Thank you.

Date: 2005-02-01 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakurazuka-jae.livejournal.com
Ooooh, veeeeery nice. I liked the fact that it was both fairly matter-of-fact, and also quite sweet (especially the ending). Not too saccharine, not too cold.

Date: 2005-02-01 11:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
This is just wonderful. I adore SmokerxAce in general, and this drabble is especially well written. I love the sentiment in it. ^_^

Date: 2005-02-01 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
Oh, very nice~
I love the feel of this. ^_^

Date: 2005-02-01 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peroxidepest17.livejournal.com
<3<3<3<3<3

How wonderfully toasty. I'm all asquee!
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Date: 2005-02-02 10:16 pm (UTC)

Date: 2005-02-01 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peach-chan.livejournal.com
your icon OWNZ ALL.


VIVA LOS CHICOS EN EL CORREDOR!

Date: 2005-02-02 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
::groans, melts:: That was gorgeous. Perfect. You made words far too sensual for the structure of the sentences, somehow. Tangibly sensual. Thank you for that.

Date: 2005-02-02 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
Ung. The world needs more Ace. *dies from pleasure*

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