Sacrifice

[thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com]

Why hello there >>;; My first fic here... would've posted my AcexSmoker now.. but I'm lazy XP;; And I tried here o-o;; It proubably won't make sence too most people but yeah ^^; I'm trying here XD; Also excuse my poor lack of Typing skills...

Title: Sacrifice

Rating: PG-13, implied sexness!

Word Count: 193

Pairing: Zoro x Luffy

Disclaimer: I dun own a thing, got it? ;-;! IF I DID, ZORO AND LUFFY WOULD BE SCREWING ;-; same with Smoker and Ace >_>;;;

Topic: Consolation

Zoro smiled as he petted the sleeping boys hair. He could feel the breaths of the younger boy upon his bare chest, and it was moments like that how Zoro realized that the boy brought him so much comfort too his mind. It was nearly enough too let the green haired male lean down and gently wake his captain, and make the boy feel like how he wanted too time and time again. Which was loved. Zoro didn't under stand at first why the other came too him for the consolation that he was wishing for. But now he was finally getting it. Slowly, but surely.

He relaxed his body as he let his hand drift through the thick locks of black hair.

He wondered how long it would take for him too have too give up the younger boy... That stirred a bit of discomfort within the green haired swordsman. Had he truly grown attached too the overly piggish and innocent Captain?

That thought put Zoro at ease once again. His comfort was within that emotional boundries. His pride was ruined when ever he held the boy...

But it was His Sacrifice.

Comments

[hyperactivator.livejournal.com]

This made me feel something. I'm not sure what but it did.

[thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com]

Does that mean you like it? ^^;;;;

[monimonika.livejournal.com]

(Yo! De-lurking after starting from the beginning of the archives and finally catching up to the latest posts.)

Now, I could forgive (read: mentally auto-correct) a couple of typos and misspellings, but the one thing that really makes this one hard to read is the consistent misspelling of every single "to" to "too". Try going back and editing all those "too"s into "to"s, please.

I'll also add that "understand" and "whenever" are single words.

As for the drabble itself, each time I read the last few lines I get this impression of something deep and meaningful and I emphasize with Zoro in that moment. But then the feeling and understanding floats away before I can grasp its meaning with words. Weird. *goes to read again*

[thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com]

Ah, yes. Like I stated at the begining: my spelling ain't that great, and I am without a spell checker at the moment, and somone willing to beta xP

[thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com]

Thanks =D!

[tomatocube.livejournal.com]

sweet.very.
:)

[thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com]

Ahhh, Saaaankyuuu ^_^