[identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Treasure
Word Count: 187
Pairing: ?x?
Rating: PG-13
Topic: Voyeurism



They are beautiful like this; moving against and between the sleepy haze of candlelight. Their shadow, which is barely separate from the prominent cocoon of outer darkness, is their only known companion during this time of heat and need and want.

But you are there. And even though you think this is not for you, you take it anyway, and stand unmoving, unnoticed, in the dark doorway of their stolen moment.

Your hands are empty, but still you feel the cords of muscle and skin moving beneath your fingertips. Standing silent, the sharp moan that rises from across the room, which is pain or pleasure but really both, feels pulled from your chest, and your throat aches from the phantom force of it. Your tongue is swollen and dry at rest behind your teeth, but it remembers or imagines the glistened tang of sultry sweat, which beads and slides around their connection.

He looks up, finally, and sees you seeing them, and understands, and forgives, and accepts. Because you are Nakama, and that means everything, including this, and you are privy to all treasure in Your World.

Date: 2005-03-06 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherriaisling.livejournal.com
That was simply breathtaking. I don’t even care who was doing what because the gorgeous imagery and the emotion which permeated my mind has rendered me incapable of doing so.

Date: 2005-03-06 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mushrooms.livejournal.com
What she said. *____*

Date: 2005-03-07 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
What she said. @_@

Date: 2005-03-06 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sporkbotic.livejournal.com
... Such a way with words. Simply awesome.

Date: 2005-03-06 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com
Dammit, I have no smart-ass remarks for this.

Date: 2005-03-06 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
Wow. Nice. Very, very nice.

Date: 2005-03-07 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
I usually can't stand second person perspective, but this was so well done. Love the imagery and the ending sentiment. Beautiful.

Date: 2005-03-07 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beanchan.livejournal.com
*blinks* That was...intriguing ^_^

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