What'cha doin'?

[fenm.livejournal.com]

Title: What'cha doin'?
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Shanks/Ben
Word Count: 272
Topic: Voyeurism



Shanks moaned in pleasure as Ben lowered himself onto his cock. It was nice to relax and let Ben do all the work for a change. Soon, the dark-haired pirate was riding his captain for all he was worth, both of them lost in ecstasy.

"What'cha doin'?"

Both men jumped at the sound of Luffy's voice. Ben quickly moved back; so quickly, in fact, he toppled off the bed, taking the covers with him. Shanks let out a howl as Ben's foot connected with a very sensitive part of his captain's anatomy. Wincing, the red-head used his remaining arm to grab a pillow and cover himself.

"You did that on purpose!" Shanks aimed a kick at his first mate's head.

Ben ducked, looking perturbed. "No I didn't!"

Luffy laughed. "You two are funny!"

"Luffy," Shanks asked, "what are you doing here?"

"I was bored, so I came to see you. What were ya doin'?"

Both men looked somewhat embarrassed as they considered how to answer the boy's question.

"Ah," said Shanks, "You see Luffy, what we were doing was uh... uh..."

"Hugging," Ben offered.

"Yes! A... special hug... it's only for adults, though. They... er... they do it to show how much they love each other."

Luffy looked confused. "But you two fight all the time!"

Ben smiled, getting back up on the bed. "Well, we do fight, but we still love each other." He leaned over, kissing Shanks gently.

"We sure do." Shanks smiled back at Ben.

"Oh," said Luffy. "Well, can we go play now?"

Shanks turned to the boy. "Sure. Let us get dressed and we'll be right out."

Comments

[sakurazuka-jae.livejournal.com]

*snickers* Those two are:
a) Incredibly poor liars for pirates (so that's where Luffy gets it from)
b) Determined to warp the boy for life, aren't they?

Beautifully done - the "Whatcha doin" right in the middle of the action was just so freaking perfect. *laughs some more*

And now... sequel! I demand a sequel! Come on, ya know Luffy's gonna bring this up later on in life!

"Let's hug!"

[dethorats]

Now that worked out about right. Ha, poor Shanks. The kick must've scattered him too much to come up with a suitably stupid explanation. Although, I agree with sakurazuka_jae, Luffy will totally have the wrong idea forever.

[hyperactivator.livejournal.com]

Cool. Like catching your parents but less gross and more sexy.^_^

[sherriaisling.livejournal.com]

This very much needs a sequel set around ten years later, something along the lines of

Nami: Where are Zoro and Sanji?
Luffy: Oh, they're in the hold, hugging.

or

Luffy: You all love me, right? Then I want a hug.

[fenm.livejournal.com]

Uh... I might do a sequel, but right now, I want to focus on the story I'm doing for the smut contest on the other OP group. So I might not be doing drabbles for a bit (except for one I've already got planned and partially written).

[sherriaisling.livejournal.com]

It makes me very happy that smut goes to the top of your priority list. ^_^ Good luck on the story. And may I ask the pairing (or do you want it to be a surprise?).

[fenm.livejournal.com]

It makes me very happy that smut goes to the top of your priority list. ^_^

Me, too! ^_^

Good luck on the story.

Thanks! I need to got ta writin'...

And may I ask the pairing (or do you want it to be a surprise?).

Yeah, it's a surprise. ^_^

[fenm.livejournal.com]

This very much needs a sequel set around ten years later, something along the lines of
(snip)
Luffy: You all love me, right? Then I want a hug.

Zoro: "Uh... ok. Er, Luffy, why are you taking your clothes off...?"

[sherriaisling.livejournal.com]

Zoro: "Uh... ok. Er, Luffy, why are you taking your clothes off...?"

Luffy: Don't you know anything? You gotta be nekkid to give special hugs.

[beanchan.livejournal.com]

Luffy...the ultimate mood-killer

[fenm.livejournal.com]

Luffy...the ultimate mood-killer

Aw, not that's fair... he was just a little kid...

[beanchan.livejournal.com]

Well...We'll forgive him for that then *wink*