Drabble from a newbie.
Mar. 8th, 2005 09:43 pmHi, I'm new to the community and I thought I'd speak up now since I finally have a drabble to share. It's first kind of writing I've done for this series so I'm sorry if the characters seem a little off since I've only gotten back into One Piece after a long hiatus. I hope you enjoy.
Title: What You Don't Know ...
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 172
Pairing: Zoro x Sanji
“Will you stop looking at that damn painting,” Zoro hisses emphasizing every other word with a sharp thrust deeper into the blond cook.
Sanji lets out a moan before panting back never breaking the rhythm of their screwing, “I don’t care what you say, that damn portrait is clicking. And I think I saw the eyes moving a moment ago.”
“It’s just your messed up imagination, stupid cook,” the swordsman growls back as he begins to quicken his pace.
It doesn’t take much longer after that for both to finally reach their climaxes, which both vocalize loudly. In the silence that follows Zoro tells Sanji, “Hear that? No clicking, told you it was all in your head.”
“I guess so,” the cook answers still not sounding completely convinced.
But it’s good enough for Zoro’s ears. As long as Sanji never figures out where Zoro’s extra spending money comes from and the payments keep being prompt he’ll be more than happy to let Nami play the voyeur to their sexual escapades.
Title: What You Don't Know ...
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 172
Pairing: Zoro x Sanji
“Will you stop looking at that damn painting,” Zoro hisses emphasizing every other word with a sharp thrust deeper into the blond cook.
Sanji lets out a moan before panting back never breaking the rhythm of their screwing, “I don’t care what you say, that damn portrait is clicking. And I think I saw the eyes moving a moment ago.”
“It’s just your messed up imagination, stupid cook,” the swordsman growls back as he begins to quicken his pace.
It doesn’t take much longer after that for both to finally reach their climaxes, which both vocalize loudly. In the silence that follows Zoro tells Sanji, “Hear that? No clicking, told you it was all in your head.”
“I guess so,” the cook answers still not sounding completely convinced.
But it’s good enough for Zoro’s ears. As long as Sanji never figures out where Zoro’s extra spending money comes from and the payments keep being prompt he’ll be more than happy to let Nami play the voyeur to their sexual escapades.
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Date: 2005-03-09 03:06 pm (UTC)*laughs* I really found your drabble to be funny! Good work!
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Date: 2005-03-09 09:19 pm (UTC)Nice piece! ^_^
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