Third Reason
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onepieceyaoi100Oh. My. God(s). I can't believe I wrote this. I can't warn people without spoiling the effect, but I'm sure I'm going to be alienating a bunch of you after you read this.
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sherrymarie: Do not read this. It will not work for you.
Title: Third Reason
Topic: Food
Rating: NC-17 (you're all going to hate me for this)
Word Count: 231
Pairing: Zeff x Sanji (in a way...)
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Before him lay the lithe, blond boy he had rescued from certain death. Starting from those frail shoulders, he trailed his hands down thin arms to feel the slight bit of pudginess in the palms, then over to the small curve of the stomach, and finally stopped on a soft thigh. Lifting the leg, he could see the plumpness of the young boy's buttock shift a bit. He licked at the inner thigh.
And then he bit down.
Hard.
The skin broke and blood spilled out. Lapping up the blood, he unrelentingly chewed off more of the flesh, feeding the hunger that had been plaguing him for weeks. He was soon down to where thighbone connected to hipbone, ripped the leg off from the rest of the lifeless body, and continued to gorge.
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Zeff opened his eyes once more to look at the ever-empty horizon of the maddeningly vast ocean. His gaze dropped down to make sure that, no, there were no extra splattered spots of blood and the only bones were the ones from his own leg. He had told the boy two reasons why he wanted the boy to go to the other side of the island and to stay there. One was to look for ships in that direction. The other was to conserve energy. The third, unspoken reason was so that Zeff would not fall into temptation.
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I'm sorry!! *cries*
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sherrymarie: Do not read this. It will not work for you.Title: Third Reason
Topic: Food
Rating: NC-17 (you're all going to hate me for this)
Word Count: 231
Pairing: Zeff x Sanji (in a way...)
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Before him lay the lithe, blond boy he had rescued from certain death. Starting from those frail shoulders, he trailed his hands down thin arms to feel the slight bit of pudginess in the palms, then over to the small curve of the stomach, and finally stopped on a soft thigh. Lifting the leg, he could see the plumpness of the young boy's buttock shift a bit. He licked at the inner thigh.
And then he bit down.
Hard.
The skin broke and blood spilled out. Lapping up the blood, he unrelentingly chewed off more of the flesh, feeding the hunger that had been plaguing him for weeks. He was soon down to where thighbone connected to hipbone, ripped the leg off from the rest of the lifeless body, and continued to gorge.
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Zeff opened his eyes once more to look at the ever-empty horizon of the maddeningly vast ocean. His gaze dropped down to make sure that, no, there were no extra splattered spots of blood and the only bones were the ones from his own leg. He had told the boy two reasons why he wanted the boy to go to the other side of the island and to stay there. One was to look for ships in that direction. The other was to conserve energy. The third, unspoken reason was so that Zeff would not fall into temptation.
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I'm sorry!! *cries*
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Date: 2005-03-11 01:00 am (UTC)Uh... I don't hate you. (pat, pat)
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Date: 2005-03-11 02:28 pm (UTC)Here you are expecting some funny/sexy drabbles to come for your topic, and then I come crashing in with this bloody piece of dark
ficdrabble. Not exactly your cup of tea. I understand. Thank you for reviewing.no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 07:21 pm (UTC)Aww.. I said that cuz you seemed to think we would. I wanted you to know that I, for one, didn't. ^_^
Granted. you've gotten other positive replies, so I guess I needn't've worried, but... ah, well. ^_^
Here you are expecting some funny/sexy drabbles to come for your topic, and then I come crashing in with this bloody piece of dark
ficdrabble.Yeah, it was... quite unexpected... ^_^
Not exactly your cup of tea.
Oh, I dunno... I've written some dark stuff. Just not here. Except for one of my first stories, "Carve".
I understand. Thank you for reviewing.
No problem.
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Date: 2005-03-11 01:03 am (UTC)Seriously I'm impressed...an rather disturbed...but in a good way ya know...
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Date: 2005-03-11 02:40 pm (UTC)Re: 0_0
Date: 2005-03-11 08:47 pm (UTC)Loving cuteness and comedy....but also adoring well written horror and gore. I wish I had an 'Elfin Lied' icon for moments like this... *goes to make one*
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Date: 2005-03-11 09:23 pm (UTC)Loving cuteness and comedy....but also adoring well written horror and gore.
Indeed. Just becasue you don't see many dark stories here doesn't me we don't like them. When the rare dark drabble does show up, it usually gets a pretty good reception. ^_^
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Date: 2005-03-11 01:34 am (UTC)I liked it, but still odd.
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Date: 2005-03-11 02:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 01:37 am (UTC)Very unique. Never apologize. ;) (for writing, I mean)
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Date: 2005-03-11 02:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 04:27 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 02:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 02:58 pm (UTC)My only regrets with this drabble is that the first part is written like bad pr0n, and that I could probably have described the 'dream' a bit more in detail, given the wordcount.
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Date: 2005-03-11 09:25 pm (UTC)actually I think the pr0n-ness of the opening is what makes it work so well, because it starts so squarely one place, and then so shockingly diverts. And the description works well for me, skin-crawlingly vivid without getting too deeply into the...ahem...gorey details. But then I have a weak stomach...
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Date: 2005-03-11 02:48 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 03:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 04:50 am (UTC)That just kinda .. stopped me short, really. Kudos on the uber dramaticism, I must say. *twitch* Oh god, I can see it happening in my head. GET OUT!! NRRRAAAARGH!!!
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Date: 2005-03-11 03:09 pm (UTC)Read lots of funny fic/drabble. Hopefully, the images from "Third Reason" will be replaced by something more palatable.
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Date: 2005-03-11 01:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 03:22 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-11 10:15 pm (UTC)And, I enjoyed this! It was dark, disturbing, and really grossed me out, and that is something that I appreciate in my fiction. *_^
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Date: 2005-03-12 01:26 am (UTC)Well, you told me that you found ZeffxSanji to be a squicky pairing, mainly because you're a fan of their gruff father/son relationship, and my drabble features Zeff (dreaming of) eating Sanji, so I thought that you may find it distasteful, and-
Hey! First you talk about squicky pairings that you usually don't enjoy and now you're saying that you like your fiction to gross you out!? Which is it!?!?
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Date: 2005-03-12 01:52 am (UTC)Besides, I don't care if Zeff eats Sanji, I just don't want him fucking him!
What?
Stop looking at me.
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Date: 2005-03-12 04:38 am (UTC)*trembles*
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*spittle flys all over screen from failed attempt at containing laughter*
I understand your stance now. Want some fried chibinasu?
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Date: 2005-03-13 04:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-16 04:14 am (UTC)I'm going to go ponder this hiding under a blanket...
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Date: 2005-10-02 11:09 pm (UTC)Oh... that was excellent, a creepy and horrible image - if it hadn't been a dream/hallucination, I would have been disturbed, but this way it was very good. ^_^
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Date: 2008-10-20 04:11 am (UTC)WHam-pow!
Great job!