My first drabble. ^_^

[hyperactivator.livejournal.com]

Okay here goes. First try.


Title:What's Wrong?
Rateing:R
Topic: Food
Pairing: Zoro/Luffy


"Zoorro. Whats wrong?" The young captian whined.Zoro looked hastily away from the door to where his lover lay nude and waiting. Then nearly broke his neck looking away again.

He realy liked Luffy. Realy he did. But did the gum gum man realy expect him to...."Zoorrro now!"

"Luffy! It's impossible!"

"Whyyyyy?"the captian writhed on the bed. Zoro looked away again quickly.

"Luffy you just ate an whole Sea King by yourself! Even if I find your ass I'll never be able to stay on!"

Luffy got up and wobbled to the bathroom. Then turned and with tears in his wide eyes cried,



"You don't love me anymore!"

Please read. ^_^

Comments

[fenm.livejournal.com]

LOL!! Yeah, I imagine sex with big!bloated!Luffy would be... interesting, to say the least.

[hyperactivator.livejournal.com]

Happy to make you lol.

[sporkbotic.livejournal.com]

*Snort* "YOU DON'T LOVE ME ANY MORE!" Ahahahah thank you for giving me just a little bit of energy to continue working on this damned map assignment.

[hyperactivator.livejournal.com]

Your welcome. ^_^

[monimonika.livejournal.com]

Even if I find your ass I'll never be able to stay on!

Ahahahaha!!! The last line was also pure comedy gold. You just need a beta-reader (person to correct spelling and punctuation) to make this perfect.

[beanchan.livejournal.com]

Could be worse...Luffy could have wanted to be on top o_0

[sherrymarie.livejournal.com]

Mental image HURTS BRAIN.

Haha! This was very amusing! ^_^

[dustyjack.livejournal.com]

::cracks up!:: XD Sorry honey, you're too fat tonight! XD

[hyperactivator.livejournal.com]

Wow. Thanks for all the praise. ^_^

[dethorats]

Bwahaha! That rocked.

[japanpeterpan.livejournal.com]

*gigglesnort*
Thanks for that.

[winter-sweet.livejournal.com]

Poor Luffy. He just doesn't understand. I feel so sorry for him *cries with Luffy*