[identity profile] fire-tears.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: The Faltering Sound of Falling
Topic: none.
Rating: R? NC-17 for the jumpy?
Pairing: Smoker/Ace (shoot me)
Word Count: 283
Author's Notes: I need to stop freaking writing this pairing. Oy vey. In other news, I'm slowly (read: a snail is outrunning me) inching my way toward maybe writing porn someday. Yay?

The Faltering Sound of Falling

There are days when the pirate simply annoys him. And then there are days when hate, while feeling not like the right word, is the only word strong enough he can use to describe the way the little shit makes him feel.

Like when Ace's smirk slips away in favour of a faint gasp. Like when Ace's sweltering-hot flesh flickers and sparks no matter how hard he tries to hold it back, and the way Ace's hips fit—feel—in his big hands. Like when the tight heat of the pirate draws a snarl from his lips and all but drives rationality from his mind. Like when Ace whimpers for a kiss instead of a stroke and makes it almost feel like something other than animal, carnal lust.

Hates him, damnit. There is another word just as strong that fits the way hate can't anymore, but that word is not in his vocabulary. And there are still the things he... hates.

The desperate, hot little noises Ace makes right before he comes, the way he rakes his nails down Smoker's back. The way he pants into the curve of Smoker's shoulder and is perfectly content to let the marine's weight rest nearly on him. The way he snuggles close on his own so that Smoker can convince himself he has to rest his chin on Ace's head instead of wanting to, the way the set of his mouth looks so soft when he sleeps. The way Ace smiles and murmurs in his slumber when Smoker strokes his thumb over a freckled cheek.

The way Ace's body in his grip can somehow make his hands a bit gentler. Fucking hates that.

Goddamned little brat.

Date: 2005-03-15 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
Mmmmmm- so yummy. ^_^ (No, no- PLEASE continue writing this pairing- you do such a good job of it. In fact; tentacle!sanji for you!)

Date: 2005-03-15 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
Aww sweet- I love sexyslut!ace. ^_^ (gotta say, I'm still much in love with the one you used for the post, though- gets a giggle out of me every time. But this one is 'yum'.)

Date: 2005-03-15 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
*ahem* Now that I can stop fangirling (and drooling) I find that I must also say; damn, but that stuck to Smoker's character. Good job- you make it so believable. ^_^

Date: 2005-03-15 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eleventyteen.livejournal.com
No! You cannot stop the Smoker/Ace love! You got me hooked like a junkie, now I'm always craving for a fix.

This was just so beautiful. I want Zoro to birth your babies.

Date: 2005-03-15 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com
-adoreadoredieshappysqueals-

My god! -hands you Chocolatecovered!Ace- >_>;; Must be happy with that! =D;

Damn... will you continue to write SmokerxAce for me, forever? -shotkilled-

(TRanslation; Will you marry me? )

Date: 2005-03-15 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com
Oh yes, very content! ^____^;

-snuggles Her Candycoated!Smoker <3-

You must learn to write smut!~ <3; Smut = God >>;;

Date: 2005-03-15 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com
Really? xD;; I'm glad you like it.

Date: 2005-03-15 05:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com
Ooh, very (damn puns) hot.

Date: 2005-03-15 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherriaisling.livejournal.com
Oh so hot! Seems like someone is becoming quite familiar with denial.

If you stopped writing this pairing, the world would be a sadder place

Date: 2005-03-15 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annoyedperson.livejournal.com
Never stop writing this pairing!

Your Stories are the best!

Date: 2005-03-15 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
This is so well done. I love the way you write these two, especially Smoker.

Date: 2005-03-15 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
YES! Now, If I could only figure out how to get him to come to my house....

Date: 2005-03-15 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beanchan.livejournal.com
I love the way Smoker rationalizes things like that ^__^

Date: 2005-03-16 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
Now there's a ficlet with a man in denial. Poor Smoker. I guess whatever he has to tell himself is alright as long as it means more smex. Great job!

Date: 2005-03-16 06:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
::melts:: AUGH. It never fails to turn me into a puddle of goo, the way you write these two. It's absolute perfection. This was an incredible piece. You capture Smoker's 'emotion' perfectly, only solidifying it with the perfect characterization. Mm. Happiness.

Date: 2005-03-16 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
Also... I LOVE the title.

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