And I STILL Manage To Get Zoro Laid!
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onepieceyaoi100Title: Right and Wrong
Pairing: AcexZoro
Topic: Uncommon Pairings
Word Count: 260
Rating: R
Summery: Schmut.
He knows, in the back of his mind, that this is probably a wrong thing to do. But he bends his head anyway, and gently, but not too gently, bites along the rise of scar tissue that stands as a prominent thing across the tanned and toned chest. His tongue feels the slight tremble of proud flesh as it soothes the nip before he smirks and bites down again.
The swordsman’s eyes are tightly closed and Ace stops and raises his head to kiss along the tense crinkled edges, and loves the short pants that push along the exposed underside of his sensitive neck.
The fierceness contained in the white knuckled grip of thick desperate fists is a lovely thing to see, like the harsh raised tendons slashing their way down and across the sweat-slicked body. He wonders for a moment who Zoro is seeing under the stubborn and inebriated darkness of his lids. He thinks that he probably knows the answer, but remembers that he doesn’t really care, even though he sort of thinks that he should.
But, whatever the swordsman may imagine, Ace knows that there is just the two of them here tonight, so he presses himself insistently down against the man below him, and mutters dark embers into the curved edge of his ear, until bleary eyes open up and focus.
He dips down again to taste what is offered, not really noticing the absent spice of stale smoke coating skin, not really hearing the wrong pitch in guttural moans, and forces his own eyes aware.
Pairing: AcexZoro
Topic: Uncommon Pairings
Word Count: 260
Rating: R
Summery: Schmut.
He knows, in the back of his mind, that this is probably a wrong thing to do. But he bends his head anyway, and gently, but not too gently, bites along the rise of scar tissue that stands as a prominent thing across the tanned and toned chest. His tongue feels the slight tremble of proud flesh as it soothes the nip before he smirks and bites down again.
The swordsman’s eyes are tightly closed and Ace stops and raises his head to kiss along the tense crinkled edges, and loves the short pants that push along the exposed underside of his sensitive neck.
The fierceness contained in the white knuckled grip of thick desperate fists is a lovely thing to see, like the harsh raised tendons slashing their way down and across the sweat-slicked body. He wonders for a moment who Zoro is seeing under the stubborn and inebriated darkness of his lids. He thinks that he probably knows the answer, but remembers that he doesn’t really care, even though he sort of thinks that he should.
But, whatever the swordsman may imagine, Ace knows that there is just the two of them here tonight, so he presses himself insistently down against the man below him, and mutters dark embers into the curved edge of his ear, until bleary eyes open up and focus.
He dips down again to taste what is offered, not really noticing the absent spice of stale smoke coating skin, not really hearing the wrong pitch in guttural moans, and forces his own eyes aware.
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Date: 2005-03-20 06:58 pm (UTC)#2: BEAUTIFULLY written. Exquisite choice of words -- I love seeing the english language used to convey such sensuality without necessarily being 'hard core'(not that I have anything against that, either, obviously.)
#3: 'so he presses himself insistently down against the man below him, and mutters dark embers into the curved edge of his ear' - This both gave me shivers and made me melt. Wonderful line.
#4: I love the very subtle allusions you gave. I can't quite decide if it's a little bit sad or not. In any case, you have positively thrilled me.
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Date: 2005-03-21 08:52 pm (UTC)And its funny, I never really thought to put Zoro and Ace together before this. I'd slash Sanji with Ace first (NATURALLY after Smoker!). But, Zoro was kind of a new idea. I also like that it would be very easy to draw in a Substitute!Luffy angle with Ace being his brother and all....
oh, look, I have a new kink. I'll just put it on the pile with the rest.
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Date: 2005-03-20 11:44 pm (UTC)How is it possible that Zoro could be thinking about
Sanjisomeone else when he has Ace there with him?no subject
Date: 2005-03-21 08:54 pm (UTC)And that left you wanting threesome sex? It left me wanting foursome sex. Come on, get a little more greedy....
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Date: 2005-03-21 10:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-22 03:49 am (UTC)Giving into impulses is fun
Date: 2005-03-22 04:15 am (UTC)Re: Giving into impulses is fun
Date: 2005-03-23 04:21 pm (UTC)Re: Giving into impulses is fun
Date: 2005-03-23 11:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-22 04:03 am (UTC)Good job, and I'd love to see a sequel of some kind in the future. ^_^
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Date: 2005-03-22 11:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-03-23 06:52 am (UTC)Ace and Zoro is nummy...and, to add to the various ideas heaped on already, there's nothing wrong with Zoro being stuck between the two brothers ^_^
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Date: 2005-03-23 11:12 pm (UTC)