Why Wonder

Mar. 29th, 2005 12:30 am
[identity profile] bluepard.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Why Wonder
Rating: G
Word Count: 300
Pairing: Nami/Usopp



She was drifting into the serenity of solitude when he appeared over her shoulder with some stupid remark. She rebuked him. He made some left-field comment. She turned it around on him. He doubled the entendre. She laughed, caught off guard, and he joined in. Then she chased him away with a book thrown at his head.

He was telling one of his thousands of half-cocked tales to the awe of his audience. She tried to ignore it, but the sudden exclamations drew her attention. She finished her line, put her papers down and listened. She interrupted with a raised eyebrow and a fact, which was tossed aside by a retort even more ludicrous. The corrections only made him grin wider.

They were running. He was faster, and she called him back. He failed to slow. She angered. Something unfriendly appeared over her shoulder with some stupid remark. And fell back, knocked off its feet. He flashed a victory pose, spooked at something behind her, and ran even faster. She had to hold down her indignation to catch up. When she did, she let it most severely loose.

The adrenaline wore off, and somehow he was once again the most injured and she the least. It would be some time before their captain woke and turned the medical ward into a celebration party. Until then, they lay limply where they were, remnants of fear and adrenaline gnawing at their bones. She forced herself to stand, to stretch, to disperse the anxious energy. He could not, doctor's orders. She watched him stare at the ceiling for some time before stepping up to him, leaning over him and leaving him with a kiss. She walked out without bothering with an explanation for him or herself. Another great lie had just come true.

Date: 2005-03-29 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherriaisling.livejournal.com
Very sweet. For some reason, I've always been able to see Nami with Usopp easier than with any of the other boys.

Date: 2005-03-29 05:56 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
You have just fulfilled my secret Nami/Usopp wishes! I totally love the idea of the two of them because of their similarities and also for their differences. Your piece did an excellent job of illustrating that, kudos for playing up the fact that they're the brains on the ship, and also the way they react to events. (I always loved the part when they were reacting to the dinosaurs and giants together - so goofy!)

Date: 2005-03-29 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crocoduck.livejournal.com
Ahh~ The whole way it was written was flowing and familiar. I could really connect. Somehow. And I too, am a secret admirer of Nami/Usopp. <3

Date: 2005-03-29 07:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadeprince.livejournal.com
Awww cuteness! Have you ever noticed how all the filler episodes seem to really push this pairing? Usopp and Nami always seem to end up together. *laughs*

Date: 2005-03-29 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadeprince.livejournal.com
*laughs* Wow, I guess you're right. *snickersnort* XD But shhh you're spoiling my attempt to make it semi-canon. X3

Date: 2005-03-29 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sporkbotic.livejournal.com
That was adorable! Nami & Usopp, yay!

Date: 2005-03-29 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
You have brought to the surface my new favorite het crew pairing WAI! Look how much everyone loves you for this! Bluepard, you never fail us. I love your description of the "smart people running around screaming," lmao. It's so true. In OP, BRAIN<BRAWN! bwahahaah but we all love it. Excellent work, beautifully pieced together.

Date: 2005-03-30 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] huabot.livejournal.com
Freaking awesome. I'm not very articulate, I know, but just awesome. Such a great end line, too.

Date: 2005-03-31 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ghostkotsuzaka.livejournal.com
I love this couple it's so cute <3

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