[identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Crushes
Topic: One-sided love of Sanji
Pairing: SmokerxAce
Rating: R
Word count: 296



“You’re fucking pathetic.”

An acquainted tongue swept slowly down and between his tender-tense divide of inner thigh. The motion was both playful and sensual; so much like the young man taking his pleasure between Smoker’s parted legs.

“You’re not going to say anything to that?”

Ace raised his head and shifted himself further up the larger man’s naked body. He rested his forearms across the broad brutal stretch of chest and bent his head to kiss sharply at the only empty edge of nicotine stained lips.

“I didn’t know it was a question.”

“It wasn’t. I just thought that you might make an attempt to try and deny it, or argue, or something.”

Ace moved down slightly and nipped mildly at the center of Smoker’s breastbone, and again with increased intention.

“Would you have believed me if I denied it?”

“Shit, no.”

“Then no point, right? Seemed stupid.”

Smoker closed his eyes for a moment and sucked deeply on the cigar chomped securely in the corner of his mouth. He rolled his hips slightly, bringing his sex closer to the torrid flesh above him, nearly hissing at the lush acrid contact.

“I saw you looking at that skinny blonde boy earlier today in the square. He didn’t look anything like your little crush, you know. Wasn’t nearly pretty enough.”

Ace pulled himself up and smirked. The expression made Smoker want to hit him. It also made him want to fuck him. He would have to see how the rest of the night played out.

“Are you going to lecture me about crushes?”

His voice dropped down to a coltish whisper.

“Luffy–“

Smoker shifted suddenly, pressing the pirate narrowly beneath him. There was no more talk of cooks, crushes, or captains for the remainder of the night.

Date: 2005-04-20 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beanchan.livejournal.com
That was good on so many levels....

Date: 2005-04-20 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherriaisling.livejournal.com
Smoker having a crush on Luffy is... well, I would say adorable, but that doesn't seem like a word which should be used to describe Smoker. And I suspect that Smoker spends equal amounts of time split between wanting to hit and wanting to fuck Ace. Great drabble!

Date: 2005-04-20 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aurora-twilight.livejournal.com
Aww bless, this was awesome.

Smoker liking Luffy..-snickers- we all should have seen that one coming.

Date: 2005-04-20 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
I SAY BRING ON THE SMOKER/BROTHERS THREESOME. Gahaaaaaujhewfurg3qty

Date: 2005-04-20 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakurazuka-jae.livejournal.com
I SECOND THAT!!!

Mix smoke, fire, and rubber and... hrm, watch the rubber melt I guess. Wait, that's not good.

(BTW, much love for your icon - that was a great line).

Date: 2005-04-20 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] japanpeterpan.livejournal.com
*puddle of goo*
and drool, while we're at it

Favorite line: It also made him want to fuck him. XD

Date: 2005-04-20 09:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com
WE ALL KNEW HE DOES XD;

-pats Smoker- Its okay, just ADMIT you get aroused by young black haired boys, and we'll proubably Leave you alone!

Smoker: -____-;

ANYWAYS XD; You win... uh... Chocolatecovered!Ace if Smoker hasn't already licked the chocolate away o_O;

Date: 2005-04-21 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatdamnedgirl.livejournal.com
Oh my god! Someone agreed! -clings- I know he blushed, and it was hilarious.

Me: ..OH MY GOD, SMOKERBLUSHEDOMGKAWAAAAIII<3<3

My muses, they called to me, and I ended up writing a ZoLu fic. Why ZOLU? I have no idea. --;

-grins- But yes, Smoker x Luffy is sexy, but I like Smoker x Ace more ^^

Date: 2005-04-21 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
That man blushed like a damn SCHOOLGIRL XD That's my favorite Smoker moment. It was absolutely perfect. Smoker-->Luffy makes a huge ammount of sense. I like SmokerxAce more because I think it's incredibly sexy and I love the fire/smoke aspect, but really it's Luffy that Smoker has the really dynamic relationship/obsession with.

Date: 2005-04-20 10:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
Ha, I knew it! Smoker, you dog, you XD And to think, both Smoker and Ace technically have the capability of providing each other with their crushes (I mean, Luffy surely trusts Ace, and Smoker seemed to handle Sanji just fine in Loguetown) ... not that it's a problem that they continue getting it from each other. Oh, no no no .. ^__^

Sounds like a plan! XD

Date: 2005-04-21 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
Ace: Hey ah, Luffy, c'mere for a sec. I got someone who wants to meet you ...
Luffy: M'kay!! *bounds along happily*

Smoker: *nabs Sanji by the leg* You're coming with me.
Sanji: GACK, what the hell??

Me: *hiding behind barrels with camera and a bag of film*

Date: 2005-04-21 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
Ah the snarkiness of it...while having sex. Excellent! I love when Ace gets the better of Smoker.

Date: 2005-04-21 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
XD CUTE!! Man. This really makes me want to write something Smoker->Ace->Sanji.

The expression made Smoker want to hit him. It also made him want to fuck him.

PERFECT line.

Date: 2005-04-21 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
*twitch* Dooooooooooooo eeeeeeeeeeet!!! *^_________^*

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