Trouble wirh brothers
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onepieceyaoi100Titles: Trouble with brothers
Words: 167 or 158
Pairing: Zoro/Luff or Zoro/Ace
rating: R/nc-17
Comments: Alternate endings but Zoro isn't happy with either
Story 1
Zoro really wished Luffy was not Aces brother. If it had been anyone else, it probably wouldn't happen this way. His body wouldn't get confused. His arms wouldn't tangle around Aces hard sweaty body and tongue inch up the back of his neck. He wouldn't kiss his earlobes and gently bite them with his teeth, tugging playfully.
When passion began to surge through him...he wouldn't tease the hole into giving him access.
He wouldn't run his fingers through his dark hair as he rocked. Or moan quite so loudly.
Luffy wouldn't wake up with Zoros erection pressed against him, Zoro panting, and moaning in his sleep. Luffy wouldn't misunderstand and participate in giving Zoro relief.
Zoro wouldn't wake up next to Luffy, exhausted, not sure where the dreams of Ace ended and the reality of Luffy began. He wouldn't feel so dirty.
If Luffy wasn't Aces brother, he could have told him the truth, but if Luffy wasn't Aces Brother then he probably wouldn't have been in his bed.
Story 1 but different
Zoro really wished Luffy was not Aces brother. If it had been anyone else, it probably wouldn't happen this way. His body wouldn't get confused. His arms wouldn't tangle around Aces hard sweaty body and tongue inch up the back of his neck. He wouldn't kiss his earlobes and gently bite them with his teeth, tugging playfully.
When passion began to surge through him...he wouldn't tease the hole into giving him access.
He wouldn't run his fingers through his dark hair as he rocked. Or moan quite so loudly.
Zoro wouldn't fall asleep against Aces back after it was finished and mumble in his sleep the name of his captain.
Ace never held any ill will. It was he who had him for now after all and Luffy had found him first.
Zoro hated that they were brothers and he could see an older version of Luffy in Ace.
Ace petted the sleeping swordsmans head.
"He'll be ready for you one day...don't worry. "
Words: 167 or 158
Pairing: Zoro/Luff or Zoro/Ace
rating: R/nc-17
Comments: Alternate endings but Zoro isn't happy with either
Story 1
Zoro really wished Luffy was not Aces brother. If it had been anyone else, it probably wouldn't happen this way. His body wouldn't get confused. His arms wouldn't tangle around Aces hard sweaty body and tongue inch up the back of his neck. He wouldn't kiss his earlobes and gently bite them with his teeth, tugging playfully.
When passion began to surge through him...he wouldn't tease the hole into giving him access.
He wouldn't run his fingers through his dark hair as he rocked. Or moan quite so loudly.
Luffy wouldn't wake up with Zoros erection pressed against him, Zoro panting, and moaning in his sleep. Luffy wouldn't misunderstand and participate in giving Zoro relief.
Zoro wouldn't wake up next to Luffy, exhausted, not sure where the dreams of Ace ended and the reality of Luffy began. He wouldn't feel so dirty.
If Luffy wasn't Aces brother, he could have told him the truth, but if Luffy wasn't Aces Brother then he probably wouldn't have been in his bed.
Story 1 but different
Zoro really wished Luffy was not Aces brother. If it had been anyone else, it probably wouldn't happen this way. His body wouldn't get confused. His arms wouldn't tangle around Aces hard sweaty body and tongue inch up the back of his neck. He wouldn't kiss his earlobes and gently bite them with his teeth, tugging playfully.
When passion began to surge through him...he wouldn't tease the hole into giving him access.
He wouldn't run his fingers through his dark hair as he rocked. Or moan quite so loudly.
Zoro wouldn't fall asleep against Aces back after it was finished and mumble in his sleep the name of his captain.
Ace never held any ill will. It was he who had him for now after all and Luffy had found him first.
Zoro hated that they were brothers and he could see an older version of Luffy in Ace.
Ace petted the sleeping swordsmans head.
"He'll be ready for you one day...don't worry. "
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Date: 2005-07-15 05:17 am (UTC)Anyways, good work!
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