INTENSE BROODING DARKNESS THAT BLEEDS DARK BLACK BLOOD FOR LOVE. or not.

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

Title: Broken
Topic: Smoker-less Ace
Rating: PG-13, for... *gasp and alarm* a BAD WORD.
Pairing: Guess. Go ahead and guess. I DARE ya.
Word Count: 235

As a sidenote, this one's dedicated to my new boyfriend. So, enjoy!



"On your knees, slave."

He'd been broken. There were no other words for it. Shattered, smashed, crushed, obliterated... but none of them suited the feeling so well as the one his brain was scrambling not to think of.

Broken.

The word itself tasted sour in his mouth. This... this stranger had just stormed into his life and taken everything Ace had; his pride, his position, his honor, his... his... well, let's just say he took a whole damn lot, m'kay?

"I said, on your knees. Did that sound like a request?"

He stared up at the imposing figure, his tanned figure outlined by a corona of morning sunlight. It was mind-boggling. How? How could this... this punk come into his life and just take over? Just up and absorb every aspect of his life? He tried to flame... but the fire just wasn't there.

Who was he? Who was this god among mortals, this breaker of men? Ace licked his dry lips, searching for the strength to utter what he knew to be his last words to any being upon this fair world.

"Who... who are you?"

The stranger just leered.

"Don't you know? I'm the Great Captain Usopp!"











...










And somewhere men are laughing, and somewhere children shout.
But there is no joy in Ace-ville, for he just got his brains fucked out.

Comments

[sporkbotic.livejournal.com]

That's hot like a microwave!

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

The original title was "Liar Liar Pants on Fire" but that gave too much away.

[dethorats]

Dammit! Made me fall out of my chair with that one. OMG, the last two lines...you totally win for that!

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Those popped into my head JUST as I was about to hit post. Then *WHAM* and "hey, a 'Casey at the Bat' gag would be GREAT here..."

[dustyjack.livejournal.com]

Last lines... BEST EVER AHAHA. This is a HOME RUN.

and now, from the ass pirate's union, local 616

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

Thank ye kindly. Comin' from ye, that be quite the compliment, YARR.

[ai-lupin.livejournal.com]

Ahahahaa! X3

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

totally off topic, but your icon makes me laugh insanely.

[ai-lupin.livejournal.com]

Well, we all know Lucci is the Count! Ah--ah--ah--ah

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

Especially me. Since I'm Rob Lucci(go check the one piece blog crew by shadowomega).

[ai-lupin.livejournal.com]

Yes, I have the blog crew on my info page. ^_^

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

Then you're my internet friend now. JOIN ME AND WE CAN RULE TEH INTRAWEB AS... AS... uh... WHATEVER WE ARE.

*friendslist'd*

[ai-lupin.livejournal.com]

YARRRRR!!!!!

[jadeprince.livejournal.com]

*dies* Wow. Just wow. XD you should be writing here more often, methinks.

[bossgoji.livejournal.com]

Dawwwwww. Thanks!

Heh, I've been on a writing jag lately, and I don't know why.

[fenm.livejournal.com]

LOL! Awesome!
THE GREAT CAPTAIN USOPP OWNZ ALL!!!

[fauxfaia.livejournal.com]

BRILLANT.

[kichara.livejournal.com]

ZOMG! That got a giggle outta me. XD

[yhibiki.livejournal.com]

*snickers* Omg. That's just hilarious.

[sherrymarie.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is so clever!!! The rhyming couplet was a nice finish. ^_^

[hungry-worm.livejournal.com]

*cracks up*

[mei-yanohi.livejournal.com]

....you can be my hero, baby. You can kiss away the pain. And I will stand by you forever. You can take my breath away.

[beanchan.livejournal.com]

Silly Fangirls! Mansex is for boys!

That was sexy man...

[lady-karasu.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Wow, love your last lines. xD