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onepieceyaoi100Hi, this is my first post. I felt the urge to write and I'd been reading these drabbles for a while now. I'm sorry for the lameness but I appreciate constructive criticism, if you want to comment.
I believe this counts as being on topic. If not, just tell me and I'll remove it.
Title: You Know You Want To
Rating: ... I dunno, PG?
Word Count: 297
Pairing: Sanji/Zoro
Topic: The demon, angel thing.
PS. I'm trying to figure out the cut thing. So if it doesn't work. I'M REALLY SORRY.
“Come on … you know you want to …” Went the little devil located on the right shoulder.
“Stop it, he doesn’t have to do it.” Snapped back the little angle on the adjacent shoulder.
They weren’t really devils and angels. Rather a little mini Sanji in black leather and another Sanji in what looked like a hospital gown.
“But why not do it? Come on, it’ll be fun. I’m sure he’ll like it.”
“Why not? It’s rude and he’ll probably freak out! You’ve seen him fight! He could kill you!”
“Oh, details, details. He’ll love it. You’ve seen the way he looks at you. He probably dreams of you doing it to him. Go ahead, no ones around.”
Sanji gulped. He was starting to like what the leather freak to his right was saying. He started to inch slowly forward to the resting swordsman but was interrupted by that simple version of himself.
“Don’t! You’ll make him mad and he’ll get his sword and kill you!!”
“Shut up!” Sanji growled just loud enough for him to hear.
“Yes! Yes! DO IT!” Chimed the wanna be leather daddy.
“No! No! Don’t!” Went the party pooper.
Finally with one last deep breathe, Sanji lifted his hand and with lightning fast speed, slapped the green haired man, who was resting against the counter, right on the ass.
“WHAT THE FUCK?!” Was all Zoro screamed as he turned around just in time to see Sanji giggling like a school girl as he raced out of the galley.
Silence followed.
“… I told you it would work.” Said the little Zoro wearing the latex pants, “All you had to do was offer and he reacted.”
Zoro blushed and looked to the floor.
“… yeah, but I didn’t want him to leave.”
Fin~
AN: Sorry about the crappyness.
I believe this counts as being on topic. If not, just tell me and I'll remove it.
Title: You Know You Want To
Rating: ... I dunno, PG?
Word Count: 297
Pairing: Sanji/Zoro
Topic: The demon, angel thing.
PS. I'm trying to figure out the cut thing. So if it doesn't work. I'M REALLY SORRY.
“Come on … you know you want to …” Went the little devil located on the right shoulder.
“Stop it, he doesn’t have to do it.” Snapped back the little angle on the adjacent shoulder.
They weren’t really devils and angels. Rather a little mini Sanji in black leather and another Sanji in what looked like a hospital gown.
“But why not do it? Come on, it’ll be fun. I’m sure he’ll like it.”
“Why not? It’s rude and he’ll probably freak out! You’ve seen him fight! He could kill you!”
“Oh, details, details. He’ll love it. You’ve seen the way he looks at you. He probably dreams of you doing it to him. Go ahead, no ones around.”
Sanji gulped. He was starting to like what the leather freak to his right was saying. He started to inch slowly forward to the resting swordsman but was interrupted by that simple version of himself.
“Don’t! You’ll make him mad and he’ll get his sword and kill you!!”
“Shut up!” Sanji growled just loud enough for him to hear.
“Yes! Yes! DO IT!” Chimed the wanna be leather daddy.
“No! No! Don’t!” Went the party pooper.
Finally with one last deep breathe, Sanji lifted his hand and with lightning fast speed, slapped the green haired man, who was resting against the counter, right on the ass.
“WHAT THE FUCK?!” Was all Zoro screamed as he turned around just in time to see Sanji giggling like a school girl as he raced out of the galley.
Silence followed.
“… I told you it would work.” Said the little Zoro wearing the latex pants, “All you had to do was offer and he reacted.”
Zoro blushed and looked to the floor.
“… yeah, but I didn’t want him to leave.”
Fin~
AN: Sorry about the crappyness.
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XD
Date: 2005-07-23 08:56 pm (UTC)Latex pants...?
Re: XD
Date: 2005-07-23 08:58 pm (UTC)Re: XD
Date: 2005-07-24 08:28 pm (UTC)This would make a good picture... What's yummier than ZoSan in the triple version (with one each in leather/latex)... *_*
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Date: 2005-07-23 11:00 pm (UTC)lol
Date: 2005-07-23 11:08 pm (UTC)Re: lol
Date: 2005-07-24 05:13 am (UTC)Devil Sanji: Do it. You know you want to...Dooooo it! He wants you to do it! ~.\ \
Angel Sanji: I...I don't know...it doesn't seem very nice...
Devil Sanji: Trust me. He's a kinky guy. He'll like it.
Angel Sanji: Well...okay... :flies over to do it:
:smacks Devil Zoro's latex pants:
Devil Zoro: Gah! What the....?! :looks over his shoulder just in time to see the chibi angel fly around the corner giggling like a school girl:
Devil Zoro:.....
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Date: 2005-07-24 12:24 am (UTC)he he
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Date: 2005-07-24 05:54 am (UTC)^_^
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Date: 2005-07-24 07:12 am (UTC)hehe
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Date: 2005-07-25 12:51 am (UTC)Sanji gulped. He was starting to like what the leather freak to his right was saying.
Too good. I'm looking forward to more posts from you! ^_^
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Date: 2005-07-25 01:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-07-27 02:34 am (UTC)Loved your drabble. It stands a very good chance of winning, in my humble opinion (I suggest you make a list of possible topics now). The sexy-cute imagery, the funniness (of the "didn't expect that" variety), and the final "awwww..." moment all made this drabble quite a read.
Additional suggestions:
Have some more confidence in your writing. I am genuinely puzzled how you could possibly think that this drabble may not be on topic. And even if the drabble wasn't on topic, off-topic drabbles are allowed and appreciated. Besides, it's up to the current topic-picker to decide if a drabble meets her/his expectations for the competition.
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Date: 2005-07-27 09:07 am (UTC)About the other stuff, I didn't read the topic thing carefully and skipped the part about the shoulder devil angel thing. He he.
And I don't know why I thought it was lame, I guess because I've never written here that I thought it wasn't going to be liked or something. I'm not sure. And I must admit, I am kind of shy about showing work (Be it writings or art work)so that might be part of it.
ANYWAY... AGAIN, THANK YOU.