Title: Betrayal
Topic: Bad Harlequin Romance
Rating: PG-13-ish?
Pairing: SmokerxAce
Word Count: 290
Inspired by the ‘Uke Ace’ topic
“Slut!”
That strong hand connected with Ace’s cheek, sending the boy to the floor as the sound of the slap echoed through the room.
“S-smoker...” Tears welled up in the pirate’s dark eyes as his stared mournfully at the man before him. The frown he had once found so beautiful, so arousing now bore down on him with nothing but malice.
“I trusted you!” The marine’s voice held angry sorrow as he spoke. “I risked my career...my life to be with you and this is how you repay me? Whoring yourself out to half the ocean? Even your own brother?”
Ace’s fist clinched in anger. “What did you expect me to do when you’re never around?! I have needs! Manly needs!”
Smoker turned away, his pride refusing to allow him to admit how truly responsible he felt for forcing Ace to betray him. “You disgust me,” he finally spoke, voice low, almost threatening. “Get out of my site and never return!!”
“Fine!” Ace rose to his feet, barely holding back the sobs the threatened to overtake his voice “You never loved me anyway, all you wanted me for was your own personal pet pirate!”
Smoker slammed his fist on his desk “OUT!”
Ace dashing through the open window, tears streaming down his face. He would never love a man again for the rest of his life.
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Tashigi’s eyebrow was twitching violently by the last line. She looked up from the manuscript. “Uh, Hina-sama....”
“Well? Does Hina’s creative writing not kick ass?”
“You haven’t showed this to the Colonel have you?”
“Yes, he said it sucked. Hina had to hurt him for that.”
Tashigi sweatdroped “It’s uh...great! You’re going to make a fortune when it’s published!”
“Hina always value your opinion.”
Topic: Bad Harlequin Romance
Rating: PG-13-ish?
Pairing: SmokerxAce
Word Count: 290
Inspired by the ‘Uke Ace’ topic
“Slut!”
That strong hand connected with Ace’s cheek, sending the boy to the floor as the sound of the slap echoed through the room.
“S-smoker...” Tears welled up in the pirate’s dark eyes as his stared mournfully at the man before him. The frown he had once found so beautiful, so arousing now bore down on him with nothing but malice.
“I trusted you!” The marine’s voice held angry sorrow as he spoke. “I risked my career...my life to be with you and this is how you repay me? Whoring yourself out to half the ocean? Even your own brother?”
Ace’s fist clinched in anger. “What did you expect me to do when you’re never around?! I have needs! Manly needs!”
Smoker turned away, his pride refusing to allow him to admit how truly responsible he felt for forcing Ace to betray him. “You disgust me,” he finally spoke, voice low, almost threatening. “Get out of my site and never return!!”
“Fine!” Ace rose to his feet, barely holding back the sobs the threatened to overtake his voice “You never loved me anyway, all you wanted me for was your own personal pet pirate!”
Smoker slammed his fist on his desk “OUT!”
Ace dashing through the open window, tears streaming down his face. He would never love a man again for the rest of his life.
------
Tashigi’s eyebrow was twitching violently by the last line. She looked up from the manuscript. “Uh, Hina-sama....”
“Well? Does Hina’s creative writing not kick ass?”
“You haven’t showed this to the Colonel have you?”
“Yes, he said it sucked. Hina had to hurt him for that.”
Tashigi sweatdroped “It’s uh...great! You’re going to make a fortune when it’s published!”
“Hina always value your opinion.”
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Date: 2005-07-29 10:47 pm (UTC)Your icons gives me ideas
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Date: 2005-07-31 01:26 am (UTC)Best line EVER. XDDDD
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Date: 2011-05-08 11:44 pm (UTC)XDD Poor Tashigi... can't really say no to Hina-san... XDD