More off topic, but its not mine...

[lady-karasu.livejournal.com]

Ok, so Bryan (my fiancé, who I am introducing now as such so I don't have to call him anything else, because 'fiancé' sounds trite, and 'boyfriend' sounds childish...) had an idea last night and wrote his first drabble ever (rather than giving ME an idea that causes me to stay up till midnight writing...) I'm sharing, because I thought it turned out rather well, and he didn't want to join the comm (hmmm, might be all those boys kissing boys that did it... ^_~).

Title: Prologue
Rating: PG
Pairing: Nakama-ish
Word Count: 201
Author: renegade_azzy



To the end of the earth .. been there, Zoro thought. Thats where he figured Luffy would drag him, but this took the cake. “Oi, We stuck here or what?”

“I dunno” the captain replied, shrugging his shoulders.

The cook took a long drag off of one of his few remaining smokes. Such vices were hard to come along by here, but victory tasted sweeter to him with a cigarrette. “I guess since we won, we can go now”, he replied. “ The others should be waiting for us to catch up. Think they'll let us in?”

“But we were there once before, why not?” Luffy curiously wondered.

The swordsman yelled from the rock he was perched on. “That was 80 years ago, and it wasn't really Heaven, you idiot! Its not that easy, you know!"

“Then lets go!” the new king of this realm yelled out as he put his straw hat back on.

There was a short sigh, “Might as well, he got us this far” Sanji muttered wiping the sweat from his face.

“Hell wasn't as scary as I thought... but its too hot... and I'm hungry. Which way?” Luffy asked his first mate.

“North?”

“Thats up.. not North marimo...”

Comments

[kotoshin.livejournal.com]

"There is no UP in space!"

Heehee.

XD;;;

For some reason, I'd love to see an OP/Irresponsible Captain Tylor or OP set in a space opera-esque setting.

Luffy and the Mugiwara gang would make such AWESOME space pirates.

[lady-karasu.livejournal.com]

Hehe... space isn't quite as warm as where they are right now... it's kinda toasty there. ^_~ But ya, I wouldn't mind seeing some Captain Tylor action for OP, either...

[kotoshin.livejournal.com]

Purgatory! XD
(I did get where they were the first read through, just wanted to do a little bit of free-association with my initial reaction to the drabble)

But yes, such a fitting end! :3
Your paramour rawks. I have my own sweetheart to thank that I'm in OP fandom at all. XD

Another free association, see how as they just won You-Know-Where:
I do so hope that they end up overthrowing the World Government at the end of OP, as well.

[lady-karasu.livejournal.com]

*laughs* Ok, you had me wondering for a minute there- but association's all good with me (and I really have had Captain Tylor moments watching OP before, so... *laughs* I almost wrote that during the last AU topic...)

[kotoshin.livejournal.com]

XD I tend to reply based on immediate first impression/free association upon first reading a ficlet, and basically, that was the rambling through my mind then.

My GF's used to it - so please excuse me if I sound incoherent.

[dethorats]

I do so hope that they end up overthrowing the World Government at the end of OP, as well.

Oooh, me too. I swear that's what's going down between Shanks and Whitebeard and somehow Luffy would be the ultimate cause of it all.


And regarding the drabble, it was great!

[kotoshin.livejournal.com]

My GF insists that given the way OP's a shonen series, Shanks'll somehow end up in a showdown with Luffy.

I'm thinking that might be VERY possible since one of the shichibuki spot IS open ....

[sherriaisling.livejournal.com]

“That’s up.. not North marimo...” XD

Cute drabble. (And I'm sure Usopp would've gone with them, had, you know, the Great Captain Usopp not already conquered Hell years ago.)

And if Bryan were to maybe... write more or something, I wouldn't mind reading it.

[renegade-azzy.livejournal.com]

Never know.. might ~_^

Thanks for all the nice comments everyone, this one just came to me after thinking of one of my other crossover fics, and then OP.. and well, here ya go.

[sherrymarie.livejournal.com]

This had me grinning. I love the whole concept. ^_^