[identity profile] sherriaisling.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Needless
Rating: G
Word Count: 58
Pairing: ZoSan
Topic: First Kisses
Notes: A different slant on the topic. And I lose at titles (again).

Kisses were soft. Sweet. Chaste. A brush of lips, petal soft and quickly gone.

They weren’t rough, hard, intense. A fast and furious meeting of tongue with tongue. Lips and teeth and pullapartgasping to gulp in air before diving in deeper.

Sanji knew he would never have a first kiss with Zoro.

Not that he wanted one anyway.

Date: 2005-08-07 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] classified255.livejournal.com
::giggles:: Very nice!! and hot ^_~

Date: 2005-08-07 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com
Of course he doesn't.
kicks him

Nice one! :D

Date: 2005-08-07 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bamf-girl.livejournal.com
Aw. I think that's Sanji's way of saying he wants very much to have a first kiss with Zoro. Of course, he can kiss me for compensation.

Date: 2005-08-07 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Haa haa, I bet he was staring at Zoro-kun the whole time he was thinking this. (In fact this could probably be what he was thinking anytime he gave Zoro a lingering look <3)

Date: 2005-08-07 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
Oooh, thats mighty hot indeed. ^_~

Date: 2005-08-08 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
*squeeee!* Thank you! *does the happy dance of icon joy* (it takes so little to make me happy. ^_~)

Date: 2005-08-08 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotoshin.livejournal.com
XDDDDD
... why do I keep envisioning Jango to go around hypnotizing everyone into either self-delusion or a massive orgy?

Date: 2005-08-08 12:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotoshin.livejournal.com
No, indeedy they don't. :3

I mean that in a GOOD way, of course.

Date: 2005-08-08 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [personal profile] dethorats
Nice take! And very smexy! Like this section in particular:
pullarpartgasping to gulp in air before diving in deeper.
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Date: 2005-08-08 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotoshin.livejournal.com
No one getting the comment or that Sanji's the Master of The Nile?

.... someone should totally draw Vivi as Cleopatra and Sanji as Mark Anthony, for kicks, as fanart. If there isn't one already. XDDD

Date: 2005-08-10 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotoshin.livejournal.com
D'uh! *slaps forehead*

I completely missed THAT interpretation - too intent on thinking that it's just Sanji trying do deny that he'd like such a kiss from Zoro.
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Date: 2005-08-08 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com
This was so very awesome. Its very concise, without losing any impact of the drabble. I love.

Date: 2005-08-09 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airairo.livejournal.com
*loves* Very nice. X3

Date: 2005-09-01 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] otaku-fan.livejournal.com
lol! omg that's so great. that's all i can say...great

Otaku_fan~

Date: 2005-09-01 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] otaku-fan.livejournal.com
u'r so welcome....just the image is amazing. ^^

Sanji knew he would never have a first kiss with Zoro.

Not that he wanted one anyway."


so hot.
so sexy.
so true!
lol. amazing work.

Otaku_fan~

Date: 2005-09-01 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] otaku-fan.livejournal.com
o yea well that's kinda wat i do, i go around throu sites and start reading all the fic's they have and i go all the way till the last one! ^^ it was a very excelent fic and i've red some of you other's i believe and you have a nack for writing. good work and keep it up!

Otaku_fan~

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