Second post.
Aug. 17th, 2005 09:22 pmI don't know why I typed this. Must be a random thing my mind does. Yes, I know it sucks. Shoot me if you like.
Title: All I See Is Cloud
Rating: G?
Word Count: 100
Pairing: Sanji x Luffy
Topic: Something off-topic.
Warning: Death. One or two, I'm not sure.
Notes: I do realize that there is absolutely no skill in this thing, and that the characters don't seem like themselves. I also realize the fact that if I didn't stat out who these characters are, no one would be able to tell. You need not yell at me for the above.
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He reached out a hand, motioning for me to grab it. I almost did, until I realized what was happening.
This wasn't right. None of this was right.
It wasn't supposed to be him.
This was suppose to be the end, though I have no idea whether this is heaven or hell or maybe there isn't heaven and hell and really it's just a place all dead people go.
I don't know, but I see him, his stupid grin and all other thoughts fade and I reach out my hand to grab his as he pulls me into the clouds.
Title: All I See Is Cloud
Rating: G?
Word Count: 100
Pairing: Sanji x Luffy
Topic: Something off-topic.
Warning: Death. One or two, I'm not sure.
Notes: I do realize that there is absolutely no skill in this thing, and that the characters don't seem like themselves. I also realize the fact that if I didn't stat out who these characters are, no one would be able to tell. You need not yell at me for the above.
---
He reached out a hand, motioning for me to grab it. I almost did, until I realized what was happening.
This wasn't right. None of this was right.
It wasn't supposed to be him.
This was suppose to be the end, though I have no idea whether this is heaven or hell or maybe there isn't heaven and hell and really it's just a place all dead people go.
I don't know, but I see him, his stupid grin and all other thoughts fade and I reach out my hand to grab his as he pulls me into the clouds.
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Date: 2005-08-18 05:03 pm (UTC)In this drabble, it seems(to me) that Sanji is dead, or near death, then he sees Luffy, which is already dead, and then Luffy takes Sanji the Spirit World. Or something like that...
It takes brains to think of something like this (something which I don't have...) and even more to write it down perfectly. Stop thinking so low of yourself, you're a good author.
I will expect more SanLu stuff from you...
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Date: 2005-08-19 12:56 pm (UTC)I'm sure you could think of pretty good ideas too, if you write them down.
And for SanLu...expect more, cause whether or not people like it I'm writing them.