Fifth Drabble/And Counting.
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onepieceyaoi100Title: Smile
Rating: G
Word Count: 270
Pairing: Luffy x ? (I admit, I had Sanji in mind when I wrote this. But it could really go with anyone...except Chopper, who I had another use for.)
Topic: Luffy
Notes: Attempted sad story, turned weird. Lots of ramble, and even though I blame that the narrator is actually talking to himself and slightly insane, it still doesn't make much sense.
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He's the only one that comes to visit me every night.
Face without a smile, but eyes with determination.
It touches me in the heart.
I don't know who he is, since he never speaks about himself. He just walks quietly into the room, sits there for a while, and goes out again.
Ever since I lost both my memory and I ability to move myself freely, I've always been here. And throughout the day, this room would usually be the only thing that accompanies me.
Then he would be there. He's not supposed to bother me at night, according to the reindeer 'doctor' on the ship. I never knew why no one stopped him.
I have a feeling that this isn't how he usually is, even if I don't remember.
He seldom speaks, and always sits by the bed watching me, as if waiting for me to suddenly recover.
I try hard to remember, but it never helps.
Sometimes, there would be a blue sea, with bubbles - lots and lots of bubbles, almost rainbow but so very grey...And I would be in it, separated from my memories.
Then he would appear, pulling me back to reality.
He never smiles. Black hair that looks soft, bright eyes, casual wear...Seems to me like someone who would look very charming when he smiles.
But he never smiles.
And I want to see him smile, but don't know how to say it. If he knew me before, then seeing me like this would be sad enough. What reason do I have to make him smile?
But still, his smile would look wonderful.
Rating: G
Word Count: 270
Pairing: Luffy x ? (I admit, I had Sanji in mind when I wrote this. But it could really go with anyone...except Chopper, who I had another use for.)
Topic: Luffy
Notes: Attempted sad story, turned weird. Lots of ramble, and even though I blame that the narrator is actually talking to himself and slightly insane, it still doesn't make much sense.
---
He's the only one that comes to visit me every night.
Face without a smile, but eyes with determination.
It touches me in the heart.
I don't know who he is, since he never speaks about himself. He just walks quietly into the room, sits there for a while, and goes out again.
Ever since I lost both my memory and I ability to move myself freely, I've always been here. And throughout the day, this room would usually be the only thing that accompanies me.
Then he would be there. He's not supposed to bother me at night, according to the reindeer 'doctor' on the ship. I never knew why no one stopped him.
I have a feeling that this isn't how he usually is, even if I don't remember.
He seldom speaks, and always sits by the bed watching me, as if waiting for me to suddenly recover.
I try hard to remember, but it never helps.
Sometimes, there would be a blue sea, with bubbles - lots and lots of bubbles, almost rainbow but so very grey...And I would be in it, separated from my memories.
Then he would appear, pulling me back to reality.
He never smiles. Black hair that looks soft, bright eyes, casual wear...Seems to me like someone who would look very charming when he smiles.
But he never smiles.
And I want to see him smile, but don't know how to say it. If he knew me before, then seeing me like this would be sad enough. What reason do I have to make him smile?
But still, his smile would look wonderful.
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Date: 2005-08-27 06:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-08-28 03:26 am (UTC)(And no, I'm not a LuNa fan. That pairing is just so boring it doesn't make sense to me. No offense, of course, to those that actually like that pairing.)
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Date: 2005-08-27 11:22 pm (UTC)Yeah, I guess it would apply to Sanji, after reading the line about the blue sea and the bubbles.(All Blue I guess...)
*holds out bowl labled SanLu drabbles* More please!
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Date: 2005-08-28 12:32 am (UTC)I kinda wish you hadn't said who you had in mind, to allow the reader to come up with who it could be on their own. But still a nice, melancholy story.
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Date: 2005-08-28 03:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-08-31 02:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-08-31 03:14 pm (UTC)So I can fix future mistakes - ^^o