[identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: The Way Inside
Paring: Zosan
Word Count: 295
Rating: PG-13
Topic: Scars



Sanji’s skin was finally starting to cool, his vocal chords easing to their normal stretch, his heart had dropped to a more reasonable rate, and Zoro was holding his hand.

It wasn’t the sort of girly hand holding that was only acceptable if at least one of the participants had breasts. If it had been, Sanji would have had to kick the girly bastard in the head, hard, in order to knock the pansiness straight out of him.

Zoro was holding Sanji’s right hand between both of his; the palm open and up. Every few minutes, a thick callused thumb traced the raise of white tissue in the center. It was one of Sanji’s oldest scars. He had gotten it slicing vegetables in the Baratie’s kitchen when Zeff had first started to train him to become a real chef. The Shitty Old Man had seen the blood and immediately kicked him between the shoulders for his carelessness, and threatened him with worse if Sanji bled into the soup.

“This is my favorite one.”

Zoro’s voice startled the cook from his thoughts. Sanji smirked, but didn’t pull his hand free.

“You’re a perverted bastard. Getting off on scars.”

Zoro looked at him for a moment, green eyes darkened with odd intent, and pulled the hand up to his mouth to trace the line with a long swipe of his tongue. Parts of Sanji that were previously done for the night, reconsidered.

“It’s the most you.” The swordsman spoke low against Sanji’s palm, dropping his gaze. “It’s the way inside.”

The cook had no idea what he meant, but his body understood the dark tones in Zoro’s voice, the hot breath against his hand, and he hooked a leg beneath the other man’s to bring them closer.

Date: 2005-09-10 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shuraiya.livejournal.com
HOT. ♥
Very enjoyable. :)

Date: 2005-09-10 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Utterly fantastic. Love it. So palm-licking good that it could send me into an incoherent squeeing fit. *reads again*

Date: 2005-09-10 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com
Nyarr! That was me. Why wasn't I logged on?!
*adds squee~age for good measure*

Date: 2005-09-10 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sherriaisling.livejournal.com
This is the most erotic thing I've read in ages. My fingers are all but twitching with the desire to just quote the whole darn thing back at you. I'm just going to do this one, “It’s the most you.” The swordsman spoke low against Sanji’s palm, dropping his gaze. “It’s the way inside.”, though, because of the mandatory state of 'Awwww!' it left me in.

Oh, and your icon is absolutely adorable.

Date: 2005-09-10 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ironpuncher2.livejournal.com
Very drool-worthy *_* Zoro getting off on scars is always a pleasure to read.

Date: 2005-09-10 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jadeprince.livejournal.com
F-fuck. Perfect. Ung. yes. God, any attention that gets paid to my hands... I love that. I can totally see Zoro investigating every bit of Sanji, cataloging his scars, choosing a favorite...

Wow. Just right.

Date: 2005-09-10 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dustyjack.livejournal.com
Mmmmm. ::purrs:: Beautiful. I love scar stuff between these two (not that I don't just love it anyway...) Very very nice.

Date: 2005-09-10 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-shy-wolf.livejournal.com
Loved this. ^____^

“You’re a perverted bastard. Getting off on scars.”

Zoro looked at him for a moment, green eyes darkened with odd intent, and pulled the hand up to his mouth to trace the line with a long swipe of his tongue. Parts of Sanji that were previously done for the night, reconsidered.


Yay for Kink!

Date: 2005-09-10 05:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenm.livejournal.com
Parts of Sanji that were previously done for the night, reconsidered.

LOL! Awesome.
Very hot, Sherry!
And I like scars, too... ^_^

Date: 2005-09-10 05:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-karasu.livejournal.com
If it had been, Sanji would have had to kick the girly bastard in the head, hard, in order to knock the pansiness straight out of him.

*laughs* Its statements like this that make ZoSan so fun; its so them. ^_^ Loved it, as always- nice work.

Date: 2005-09-10 09:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kichara.livejournal.com
Damn, that was hawt. And yet so loveable!

I want to draw Zoro examining Sanji's hand now. <3

Date: 2005-09-10 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
*goes weak in the knees*
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Date: 2005-11-21 08:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winterwaltz6.livejournal.com
Ok, I know that this comment is way too late, but forgive me, I've just gotten into the fandom and am doing that "lets read all the archives!" thing.

But, I have to tell you, I loved this piece. It was so fantastic. You know how sometimes you read something and you are just left with this image and it never quite leaves you and someday down the line you'll just remember that one single thought and have to search around to find that older fic? That's how I feel about this.

The whole thing just leaves you with this wonderful tone and mood and the most perfect imagery, not to mention that sublte message underneath it all, that I just...am so incoherent in trying to describe what I think you've accomplished with this. I hope you try to understand what I'm trying to get at, at least. Seriously, thanks for the wonderful fic.

Date: 2005-11-25 01:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winterwaltz6.livejournal.com
Oh, glad to know I made a day better, that's always nice to know!

Thanks for the welcome. Somehow I was lucky enough that Dizzy was the first site I came across when searching for fic and have consequently read almost all of [livejournal.com profile] scuttlebutt_inc's fics. Which are so fantastic, I cannot believe it. Yeah, the talent is amazing here, but even better, everybody is friendly. Thanks again.

Date: 2005-12-05 02:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] utopiantrunks.livejournal.com
I know this is from a while ago, but damn, it's good. o_o Sexy...

Date: 2008-09-22 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com
I cannot put into words what this did to me beyond:- *melts*

Date: 2013-12-10 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rine28.livejournal.com
I found this through a rec list for zosan and I'm happy I did :)

So I start reading this and I'm thinking how hot it is and the it get's to this line:“It’s the most you.” The swordsman spoke low against Sanji’s palm, dropping his gaze. “It’s the way inside.” and for me that just added a whole new layer of meaning. It evolved from smut to intimacy. It became a special moment. Thanks :)

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