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onepieceyaoi100Title: Tryst
Theme: Secret
Pair: Sore wa himitsu desu!
Word count: 319
Rating: NC-17
Ace's tongue entwined with his lover's, their hands running over each other's bare chests and backs. The pirate leaned back, looking into the boy's eyes. "Are you ready?" His partner nodded, laying back. Smiling, Ace got the lube off the nightstand, applying it to the other man's anus. Then he put some on his own cock, making it get even harder than it already was. Smiling, he spread his lover's thighs a bit more, moving forward, pushing into him. The boy moaned, arching up.
"Yes," the boy moaned, pushing back. Smiling, Ace leaned down, resting his hands on the bed, on either side of his partner's head. Then he began pumping into the boy in a slow, steady rhythm. The boy smiled up at him. "You can be a little rougher," he said.
"Ok," The older boy said. He sped up, thrusting into the boy forcefully. The reaction was immediate and intense; the younger boy let out a cry, thrusting back just as enthusiastically.
"Oh god," Ace moaned, "this is incredible..."
"Yeah," his lover replied.
Ace reached down, holding the boy's hips, stilling him so he could do all the work. His partner didn't object, just riding Ace's thrusts. He moved up onto his hands, practically sitting up as Ace continued to screw him.
"I... I'm almost there..." Ace moaned as he felt himself reach climax. "I... I... uhh... unh... YES!"
Ace panted, letting his hands drop from the boy's waist and falling forward onto his shoulder. The boy laughed.
"That tiring?"
"Hey, it's been a long day," Ace said. "I'll be ok in a second."
"Ok," the boy replied. "Cuz now it's my turn!"
Leaning back, Ace smiled. "Ok." He kissed the boy. "Luffy... you know we can't tell anyone about this, right?"
"Yeah, I know. They'd think it's weird, or something."
"Right." Ace kissed his younger bother gently. "So, I'm ready for you now."
"Cool," Luffy replied.
Theme: Secret
Pair: Sore wa himitsu desu!
Word count: 319
Rating: NC-17
Ace's tongue entwined with his lover's, their hands running over each other's bare chests and backs. The pirate leaned back, looking into the boy's eyes. "Are you ready?" His partner nodded, laying back. Smiling, Ace got the lube off the nightstand, applying it to the other man's anus. Then he put some on his own cock, making it get even harder than it already was. Smiling, he spread his lover's thighs a bit more, moving forward, pushing into him. The boy moaned, arching up.
"Yes," the boy moaned, pushing back. Smiling, Ace leaned down, resting his hands on the bed, on either side of his partner's head. Then he began pumping into the boy in a slow, steady rhythm. The boy smiled up at him. "You can be a little rougher," he said.
"Ok," The older boy said. He sped up, thrusting into the boy forcefully. The reaction was immediate and intense; the younger boy let out a cry, thrusting back just as enthusiastically.
"Oh god," Ace moaned, "this is incredible..."
"Yeah," his lover replied.
Ace reached down, holding the boy's hips, stilling him so he could do all the work. His partner didn't object, just riding Ace's thrusts. He moved up onto his hands, practically sitting up as Ace continued to screw him.
"I... I'm almost there..." Ace moaned as he felt himself reach climax. "I... I... uhh... unh... YES!"
Ace panted, letting his hands drop from the boy's waist and falling forward onto his shoulder. The boy laughed.
"That tiring?"
"Hey, it's been a long day," Ace said. "I'll be ok in a second."
"Ok," the boy replied. "Cuz now it's my turn!"
Leaning back, Ace smiled. "Ok." He kissed the boy. "Luffy... you know we can't tell anyone about this, right?"
"Yeah, I know. They'd think it's weird, or something."
"Right." Ace kissed his younger bother gently. "So, I'm ready for you now."
"Cool," Luffy replied.
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Date: 2005-09-18 03:27 pm (UTC)But other than that, I think the piece itself needs some work - it doesn't flow very well to me, and it seems more like the standard fanfiction from whatever fandom.
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Date: 2005-09-18 06:06 pm (UTC)I think it could've been better though, so it gets three cookies out of five.
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Date: 2005-09-19 10:26 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-09-19 10:27 am (UTC)