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onepieceyaoi100My writer's block has once again magically disappeared (for now)! My time not spent on writing has been spent either living-in-the-real-world, playing Kingdom of Loathing (great game), or reading up on Japanese Zoro x Sanji fics (I'm a guilty fan of the herd).
Title: Obsessed (whee! how original is that?)
Rating: PG (since G seems to mean "no innuendo whatsoever allowed")
Word Count: 236
Pairing: It should be obvious.
Topic: Obsession
Note: This drabble is best read slowly.
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It was an obsession. This wanting, this craving, this longing. It seemed to him to have been there from the very beginning and it had slowly grown a bit out of his control.
It had gotten to the point that whenever he caught a glimpse of the blond cook, he had to swallow so as not to drool stupidly. The cook wouldn't have appreciated that.
But that didn't stop him from looking when the cook was within his element. It was mesmerizing, watching the cook's body move, muscles flexing as the cook performed feats that seemed near-impossible.
It was hard for him not to reach out in an attempt to get even a smidgeon of what he craved for. This irritated the cook sometimes (most times) into violence, which he strangely found becoming enjoyable. Even the kicks had become somewhat pleasurable and helped to stoke his yearning even more.
Their numerous physical scuffles had given him insight into the cook's body language. Right now, he could tell by the cook's stance that the cook was going to relent to his desire.
"What do you want?" the cook asked, sounding a touch flirtatious, although the answer was obvious to both by now.
"MEAT!!" shouted the hungry one, a huge grin splitting across his face and anticipation sparkling in his eyes as to what wonderfully cooked meat Sanji would prepare for him this time.
Yep, definitely an obsession.
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Secret Alternate Title: Pavlov's Monkey
Also, can you guys tell me if the effect I was going for worked? Or was the pairing (and ending) blatantly obvious and you weren't expecting something else?
Title: Obsessed (whee! how original is that?)
Rating: PG (since G seems to mean "no innuendo whatsoever allowed")
Word Count: 236
Pairing: It should be obvious.
Topic: Obsession
Note: This drabble is best read slowly.
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
It was an obsession. This wanting, this craving, this longing. It seemed to him to have been there from the very beginning and it had slowly grown a bit out of his control.
It had gotten to the point that whenever he caught a glimpse of the blond cook, he had to swallow so as not to drool stupidly. The cook wouldn't have appreciated that.
But that didn't stop him from looking when the cook was within his element. It was mesmerizing, watching the cook's body move, muscles flexing as the cook performed feats that seemed near-impossible.
It was hard for him not to reach out in an attempt to get even a smidgeon of what he craved for. This irritated the cook sometimes (most times) into violence, which he strangely found becoming enjoyable. Even the kicks had become somewhat pleasurable and helped to stoke his yearning even more.
Their numerous physical scuffles had given him insight into the cook's body language. Right now, he could tell by the cook's stance that the cook was going to relent to his desire.
"What do you want?" the cook asked, sounding a touch flirtatious, although the answer was obvious to both by now.
"MEAT!!" shouted the hungry one, a huge grin splitting across his face and anticipation sparkling in his eyes as to what wonderfully cooked meat Sanji would prepare for him this time.
Yep, definitely an obsession.
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&
Secret Alternate Title: Pavlov's Monkey
Also, can you guys tell me if the effect I was going for worked? Or was the pairing (and ending) blatantly obvious and you weren't expecting something else?
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Date: 2006-01-13 02:06 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2006-01-17 02:34 am (UTC)The hardest part I had writing this was keeping the pronouns straight. I had to keep the 'he's from getting confused with the other character while maintaining Luffy's anonymity. That's why I ended up with ten instances of "the (blond) cook".
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Date: 2006-01-15 07:11 am (UTC)Love the atmosphere you created. The other title made me chuckle.XD
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Date: 2006-01-17 02:44 am (UTC)A: "Push (pant) harder! Unf."
B: (listening in) "!!" (opens door) "You perver-!...er?"
A: We were just building a bed, idiot.
scenario and its variants (not that they're not funny anymore, I still enjoy reading them).
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Date: 2006-07-10 02:03 pm (UTC)