Drabble: [Fish Under] (Obsession)
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onepieceyaoi100Title: Fish Under
Rating: PG-13?
Word Count: 200
Pairing: I'm not telling. Should be obvious, but since it's not really the point, I'm not telling.
Topic: Obsession
Notes: I thought for a long while if I should actually type this, and even after finishing, I pondered on whether to post it. But since I finally decided...comment, review, or kill me for writing something this weird/bad?
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There are reasons why a cook should keep his hands to himself. In Sanji's case, it involves much more than mere protection.
On nights like this, when the sky is dark and the moon is dim and the stars shine with all their brightness, they would lie on the deck, pretending whoever's watching the night wasn't there.
And his hands would be on the other, moving across the smooth surface.
He would remember the kitchen. Newly caught fish still bouncing, waiting to be dealt with. He would then tap the fish lightly, to taste it's age; he already knows how much strength he would need to cut open the flesh.
And while thinking that, his hand moved on top of his lover's rubbery body, as he felt the flesh bounce under his touch.
Just like the fish in his kitchen.
He wondered once if the seaweed-head ever thought this, with his ability to cut open even metal. But swords were meant for cutting open a body; his knifes were for chopping apart.
The body under him made a gurgling sound (just like a fish) when his nails marked the skin.
Rating: PG-13?
Word Count: 200
Pairing: I'm not telling. Should be obvious, but since it's not really the point, I'm not telling.
Topic: Obsession
Notes: I thought for a long while if I should actually type this, and even after finishing, I pondered on whether to post it. But since I finally decided...comment, review, or kill me for writing something this weird/bad?
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There are reasons why a cook should keep his hands to himself. In Sanji's case, it involves much more than mere protection.
On nights like this, when the sky is dark and the moon is dim and the stars shine with all their brightness, they would lie on the deck, pretending whoever's watching the night wasn't there.
And his hands would be on the other, moving across the smooth surface.
He would remember the kitchen. Newly caught fish still bouncing, waiting to be dealt with. He would then tap the fish lightly, to taste it's age; he already knows how much strength he would need to cut open the flesh.
And while thinking that, his hand moved on top of his lover's rubbery body, as he felt the flesh bounce under his touch.
Just like the fish in his kitchen.
He wondered once if the seaweed-head ever thought this, with his ability to cut open even metal. But swords were meant for cutting open a body; his knifes were for chopping apart.
The body under him made a gurgling sound (just like a fish) when his nails marked the skin.
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Date: 2006-01-16 04:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-01-16 09:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-01-17 04:17 am (UTC)Aieeeeee! *libido runs for the cliffs and jumps (without a parachute or lifeline) head-first to the spiky rocks below*
Fish is just not sexy for me. Cold, slimey, smelly, and better off dead on my plate rather than alive and twitching.
That said, your drabble effectively got an emotional reaction out of me (and not the "you call these mediocore strings of words, writing!?" kind of reaction) and for that it is highly commendable. *salutes*
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Date: 2006-01-17 07:05 am (UTC)We all know Sanji's obsessed with fish. Why else would he want to find a place with all the fish in the world? *snicker*
And again - thanks for commenting. *feels stupid for repeating this time after time, but feels bad if she doesn't*
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Date: 2006-01-17 01:32 pm (UTC)Gave me goosebumps.(In a nice way though.)
The description was...like...I could actually feel that texture. I like it!!