[identity profile] sherrymarie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Difference
Rating: R
Word Count: 137
Pairing: Pirates/Ace, Marines/Ace, Smoker/Ace
Topic: pirates and marines
Summary: Ace certainly gets around.
A/N: The first line of this drabble popped into my head as soon as I read this week's new topic.



The main difference between a pirate and a marine, Ace thought, was the way that they fucked.

Pirates are reckless adventure, and when they fuck, they fuck with freedom and disregard. Their hands reach out greedy and their kisses are edged with broken paths and sleazy delight.

Marines are order and obedience. They touch with restriction and conscious. They slide down and away from their narrow path of order when they slide deep into him; they fuck him secret and aware in guilt and silence.

Then there’s the one who despite the specifics of title and rank, is actually somewhere in between . Ace lays beneath him and watches the acknowledgement of duty across the furrowed brow, feels emphatic need with each slow rough thrust, and tastes the fearless choice of transgression wrapped around the nicotine tongue.

Date: 2006-02-24 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mei-yanohi.livejournal.com
Yum. Yum x100.

Date: 2006-02-25 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aku-spooky.livejournal.com
Unnnnn...-is a pile of melted goo- ^-^

Oh my god, that was soooo freakin hot. Damn!! That line really gnabbed my attention. XD Yumminess~!!! Awesome job!!

Date: 2006-02-25 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arelente2.livejournal.com
OMGawsh!!!! that was fuking good!

Date: 2006-02-25 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kikkuma.livejournal.com
*happy sigh*

Oh Ace. You wonderful, wonderful man-whore you.

Excellent. ♥ .....I feel compelled to make a SmokerxAce icon now. =>.>=;

Date: 2006-02-25 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paxnirvana.livejournal.com
asldkjf;oai!87$ehfbn.... incoherent goo...

What is it about slut!Ace that is so damn appealing to me? *dies of hot* "Sleazy delight" new favorite words. Guh.

Date: 2006-02-25 03:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyperactivator.livejournal.com
It's Ace's fault for not wering a shirt. Dang lovable pervert.^____^

Date: 2006-02-25 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plotbunny-tiff.livejournal.com
Editor!Tiff: Hmmm...wonderfully acute observations on lovemaking styles, fantastically executed word choices...this drabble gets a gold star, wouldn't you agree?

Fangirl!Tiff: ::incoherent pervy mutterings of glee::

Editor!Tiff: ::sighs::

Date: 2006-02-25 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com
137 x guh = teh love.
Or, you know, something more coherent but with basically the same meaning.

Date: 2006-02-25 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bumpgrrl.livejournal.com
woot! holy hot.

Date: 2006-02-28 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beanchan.livejournal.com
A happy little shiver just ran down my spine

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