Gawsh.... i must be accused of libel...(& reasons why you should know your partners... very well)

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this entry by plotbunny_tiff really motivated me to write a very wierd paring (damn im so killing myself right now!) anyways my unsuspecting victims comrades, may i ask a favor to evaluate some works of mine that have been neglectedly commented my none (follow the cut)

Title: Plan A & B
Rating: 'bout NC-17 if you ask me
Word Count: 299
Pairing: Zoro x ?????, Zoro + Sanji
Topic: pirates and marines

In a local hotel room, our very non direction oriented swordsman is taking his time….

 

Damn that shitty cook.What’s taking him so long?! He even arranged this meeting!!

 

 

“lets see…. Hotel Caribbean, where is that?” a typical blonde character said to himself while looking in a scrap of paper.

 

“pssst!” this unyielding call was heard from an alley. The cook being pissed off…answered a call from a man… or a boy 5 times smaller than him with a pink wig for hair…

 

“What do YOU want?” putting on his pissed off face.

 

The character, shaking off his feet answered in a very smallvoice: “You are a friend—of Lu-Luffy’s right?”

 

Upon saying that, the cook realized who this guy is..

 

“Oh! Your that Coby guy right?! The guy Luffy was talking about?!”

 

“Luffy talked about me!!!” tears swelled up.

 

“Yeah, wanna meet him? He’s in the ship.”

 

“Sure!!! But what about your meeting?”

 

“That’s okay, the bastard might got lost anyways.”

 

 

Unfortunately Zoro took a driver to deliver him to the Flamenco Hotel

Damn that shitty swordsman, it’s been freakin 30 mins!!

 

The lights went off.

 

A (suspecting cloaked) character showed up from the (very quaint) bathroom…

 

Zoro was etching to pull out his sword, when he saw a glint of blonde and the body shape is the same so…

 

The swordsman pulled the figure and pinned him down, without a second thought (of even pulling off that cloak) and started with the purpose of punishing him… good.

 

 

After an hour of laughing over past memories and mistakes,Sanji decided that Marimo-kun maybe at Hotel Caribbean right about now.

 

While opening the door, he saw a very exhausting (somewhat angry) Zoro.

 

“Wow, you’re fast.”

 

“WTF! I haven’t even left yet!”

 

“Then who?”

 

Phew good thing Helmeppo’s safe….

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pls post comments and suggestions

heres the favor.
ive linked these to 4 entries and i was thinking..... could you see whats wrong with these and give me tips on how to write a good senti/drama drabble/fic, anyways im thanking you for your time ^^ (pls be gentle "im allergic to harshness...joke!")

Who? (ver 1 and 2)

Date

Dont throw things anywhere