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So much for studying...

How does this plotbunny keep mugging me? SNAFU was supposed to be a one shot. [personal profile] paxnirvana, I humbly apologize. This is the best I can do.

Title: Mayday
Series: Distress Signals (Follows "SOS")

Word Count: 297 (eerie...)
Rating: PG for language
Topic: Mistakes (still)
Disclaimer: If I owned One Piece, I wouldn't be worried about failing this test, but I am, so I don't.



Mayday

Stupid asshole.

There were times when Zoro missed waking up with the stupid love-cook spooned against him. The extra warmth made his naps much more enjoyable, and although Sanji was rather bony to lean against, the rhythm of his heartbeat and the gentle murmur of his voice were the most soothing sleep aides he’d ever found.

All of this is your fault.

There were times when Sanji missed the sight of the swordsman’s cocky, confident grin right before Zoro kissed him. The knowledge that he would always be met with an equal and opposing force, constantly pushing and pulling at him for more, was one of the best motivators he’d ever found.

You stupid bastard, you actually made me sorry.

Zoro found himself reaching out for the warmth that was missing in the middle of the night.

Sanji found himself searching for the smile that was never directed to him anymore.

I miss you.

Luffy locked them both in the anchor deck and told them he wasn’t letting them out until they “kissed and made up”, and that it was “Captain’s Orders”. They sat in dead silence facing opposite sides of the room. Neither of them bothered to complain that they sat with their backs touching.

Zoro, unsurprisingly, fell asleep.

I love you.

Sanji kissed words he couldn’t say into sea-green hair and covered the sleeping man with his jacket.

Zoro curled around the empty space in his arms and kissed words he couldn’t say into the coat.

The swordsman woke a few hours later, and the cook and his coat were both gone.

I’m sorry.

“Hey.”
“Hey.”
“Look, I’m—“ Both men started at the same time.
“Marines!” Usopp yelled from outside.
They shared a look. Later, there would be time to say it.

Later.

{End}

Date: 2006-03-09 05:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ptps.livejournal.com
Awww haha XD So sweet. I laughed out loud at the part about Luffy locking the both of them up, it's just so ridiculously logical in Luffy sense. XD

I didn't comment on the earlier one, but you put in a hell lot of tension into it. This one just... makes me feel all melty and squishy and... hmm... >w< b

Date: 2006-03-09 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chrysaliss.livejournal.com
I think this is just beautiful: their relationship is frustrating (no communication: too much pride, too stubborn for their own good) but it seems words are not really needed anymore in the end, only each other's presence is.
Ah, it makes me feel slightly girlish but it's ok cuz I like this feeling when reading a fic too! ^_^

Date: 2006-03-09 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paxnirvana.livejournal.com
Does it make me completely hopeless that this Neither of them bothered to complain that they sat with their backs touching. line reduced me to mush? *grins big*

And the not talking. And the stealth-kissing. Those rule too. Dorky boys.

*blinks* Did I make you not study?! *bows* So sorry!

Date: 2006-03-10 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tripoverhercats.livejournal.com
Aw.... ::Wibbles::

Men. So cute, so dorky. Able to communicate great emotional confessions in a grunt and shoulder butt.

Date: 2006-03-10 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tripoverhercats.livejournal.com
=^__^=

Yes, I enjoyed it v. much.

The icon is from Saiyuki Reload. (technically season 3) There's a entire series of little short outtakes at the end of each episode called "Urasais" (Shut up being Sanzo's very favorite word) and in that one Sanzo has apparently tied and bound Gojyo up to prevent him from stopping Sanzo's "cheating" in a game that Goku and Hakkai are playing.

These are of course the little moments that make slashers hearts fill with terrible glee. Take it if you want to, just credit "telophase" as she iconed that little moment of crack.

Date: 2006-03-13 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kikkuma.livejournal.com
*smacks forehead* And once again, I feel compelled to kick myself for having not posted a comment earlier. *falls over*

I was so happy to see that this plotbunny had decided to pay you another visit. The boy's thoughts and actions combined were perfect- and the Captain's Orders were just what I needed to further brighten up my day.

*le-sigh* Man-angst. It's a wonderful thing, isn't it? *snerks*

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