lol damn

Mar. 17th, 2006 12:09 am
[identity profile] ptps.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Haha I wrote this up then checked back just to see the theme had ended... oh well. Serves me right for not writing earlier but eh.

Title: Over Time
Rating: Pg-15 for language I guess?
Word Count: 299
Pairing: Zoro x Sanji
Topic: Memories



The first time he’d said it, it’d sent the cook into a flustered, shrieking frenzy, and Sanji had chased afore mentioned stupid bastard out of the galley. With a broom. He had been that flustered not to have thought about kicking the shithead. It wasn’t everyday one of your nakama, and the swordsman at that, sauntered up to you and asked, “So, wanna fuck?” in the same tone of voice one might enquire what he was preparing for dinner.

It’d taken the cook three hours and several dunkings of his cranium into cold water before the question stopped banging around inside his skull, and had continued poking at the back of his mind over the next few weeks.

The second time he’d said it was seven seconds after yet another one of their more intensive fights, as they both lay sweating, panting and gasping for air on deck. The fight was promptly resumed. Sanji swore afterward that the reddish tinge his face had taken on was due to his exertion.

The third, fourth, and subsequent questions were met with gradually decreasing resistance as the cook fell into familiarity, and Sanji’s explosive reactions slowly dwindled down to a subdued snort and an almost embarrassed glance in the opposite direction. He’d never said yes; but he hadn’t said no, either; in the end, it was the cautious step towards him, strong hands resting on either side of the railing behind him, and a breathed, “Well?” that caused him to yank the idiot into a swift, rough mouth clash. He was certain this wasn’t what kisses were supposed to be like.

“You’re too fucking naggy,” Sanji snarled, a few seconds after it ended.

Zoro smirked, and leaned in once more. “If memory serves me right, your reply was different thirty-three proposals ago.”

AN: I'm really bad with writing and this is my first attempt at a pairing ever, please no sue.

Date: 2006-03-16 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akayalovesyaoi.livejournal.com
If it's a first attempt then you can be my God from now on, 'coz your later attempts will probably even better than this one and this one is &hearts &hearts &hearts

Date: 2006-03-16 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Oh gah A broom! XD

Nice jobe <3 ^>^

Date: 2006-03-16 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
Priscilla, this is so awesome. Seriously, I'm all quivery inside. lol

in the end, it was the cautious step towards him, strong hands resting on either side of the railing behind him, and a breathed, “Well?”

Yes. Just... yes. *shakes head* Awesome. I love it, it made me smile so much! lol

Zoro approves!

Date: 2006-03-16 05:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paxnirvana.livejournal.com
Guh. Persistent Zoro-lust. My fave. *is melted*

Date: 2006-03-17 08:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rezykel.livejournal.com
... in the end, it was the cautious step towards him, strong hands resting on either side of the railing behind him, and a breathed, “Well?” that caused him to yank the idiot into a swift, rough mouth clash.
Olala...! That sentence was love. Much rabu rabu. :D

Go Persistant!Zoro.

Date: 2006-03-17 09:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-03-17 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emlan.livejournal.com
This is actually really good! And short enough for me to keep reading haha, I always lose interest with 10-chapter fics T^Tb

Date: 2006-03-20 02:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mango-32.livejournal.com
Laughs at the image of Sanji chasing Zoro out with a "broom" (Hearts)XD

"He’d never said yes; but he hadn’t said no, either;"
This line is Fabulous!

And I just love how Zoro does it.*snickers*

Looking forward to more of your lovely works.

Date: 2006-03-21 03:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plotbunny-tiff.livejournal.com
Man I'm late with this. ::laughs:: Sorry

Ahem, anyway, if this is your first attempt, then by all means keep going, cause this is frickin' awesome. Love it to bits!

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