[identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Cream
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 250
Pairing: Kuro/Zoro
Topic: Education


He wanted to make him bleed.

He wanted to make him scream.

He wanted to see the arrogant swordsman writhe beneath him, swearing and sweating and exquisite in his agony.

He hated.

He hated them all.

He hated that damned liar, that Usopp, with his pretty words and his hold over Kaya that had threatened everything he had worked for.

He hated that wretched thief, her cunning whiles, her shrewd calculations, all legs and breasts and sharp smiles.

And he hated that insignificant rubber brat, in all his innocence and ignorance, besting him, felling him, denying him the chance at crossing swords and claws.

He wanted, wanted so badly, wanted to see the frustration in dark eyes as Roronoa Zoro was humbled and humiliated, wanted to prove that three blades were nothing to him, who had four on each hand. A much needed lesson.

Wanted to take him, bend him, break him.

Wanted so badly.

Wanted to tear into him, feel the flesh give around him, see the blood run from him, stain his own skin coppery-red. Wanted to hear hoarse cries and curses.

Wanted to lick at each new wound, drink in that anguish. To draw terrified moans, to scratch at his throat, to be inside, to see the words being formed, to force himself down into the source of such sinful noise.

Wanted with an intensity that left his breath short and his teeth bared.

Wanted.

Would take.

Kuro had only to wait.

Soon.

Soon, he would take.

Date: 2006-03-23 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plotbunny-tiff.livejournal.com
@_@...oh. Oh my.
...
....

When I was very young, I picked up a copy of Steven King's Misery and read it. It terrified me on so many levels that I could feel it in my bones. It was an exquisite horror, and kept me glued to each page.

He became my favorite author straight away.This drabble has given me that feeling again. Thank you.

Date: 2006-03-23 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
Nothing much left to say after that first comment. lol My eyes did widen a fraction and DAMN. Now I must ask, do you write more fiction? Longer fics revolving around Zoro (my absolute favourite character, may I add)? Your drabble screams awesome, I'm sure your other work is just as instense.

Date: 2006-03-24 08:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
HRRRNHHHH will you be posting upcoming fics in your own LJ? Or in the comms? I need to friend you or keep my eyes peeled so I don't miss them!!!

Date: 2006-03-24 08:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
Mmmmm... yes I totally must be here to witness it all. I may be a twisted fangirl, but lol Anyway, waiting to see more of your delicious OP work!

Date: 2006-03-23 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kikkuma.livejournal.com
*cheeks flush* Oh me oh my.

You know, a lot of what I have to say feels... inadequate at the moment. That aside, this was… This is something that I’ll be more than content to re-read a few times over; just to keep the feel of it fresh in my head.

Reading of Zoro caught in the hands of some sadist villain is something that will always make my insides twist a little- and when written well, as this was, I can’t help but melt into a fangirly puddle of goo for the author that produced it. Thank you. I very much enjoyed reading this. ♥

Date: 2006-03-23 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mango-32.livejournal.com
Oh...gosh...This is awesome...the horror, the emotions...
I knew Kuro was a sadist, and evil...but this drabble really kicked in the 'scary' part, and made me shiver. I love your Kuro & Zoro.

Looking forward to more of your lovely works.

Date: 2006-03-25 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morriwritestuff.livejournal.com
Good damn, you evil fiend, I have enough freaking messed-up OTPs! I don't need Kuro/Zoro.

*Sighs*

All right. I give. Sign me up.

Also, Kuro is so a crazy sadist. You are wise.

Date: 2006-05-01 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arnavon-san.livejournal.com
Ah, more stories by Salmon-san. Always good. And very, very hot.

Date: 2007-07-23 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] onikotsu.livejournal.com
My brain shut down after reading this, I love seeing uke!Zoro and this peice is so good and rfgnllgbfrrrrrbgvzcxblzcbufl!

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