[identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Visual
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 139
Pairing: Smoker/Ace
Topic: Porn


Smoker subtly peers over the top of his report, watching the sweating pirate on his bed groan and pant.

Kneeling, thighs spread. Hand disappearing behind his back, shoulder working, and Smoker can see the exact moment Portgas adds another finger.

The words of the report have long since faded to red-tinted nonsense, but Portgas doesn’t need to know that. Not when the self-satisfied smirk has finally faded as teeth worry at his bottom lip.

Leaning forward to brace his hand on the mattress, and it takes every ounce of self-control Smoker possesses to tear his eyes away from the sight, and back to the blurred report.

Portgas whines slightly, breathing laboured. “Almost .. Nn .. Almost done, Taisa?”

Smoker keeps his eyes on the writhing script and takes deep breaths.

“Impatient brat,” he growls when his voice feels steady.

Date: 2006-04-05 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morriwritestuff.livejournal.com
Hand disappearing behind his back, shoulder working, and Smoker can see the exact moment Portgas adds another finger.

Glah! *Flails* Self-prep is sexy for the win! And I love that Smoker is torturing both of them just to knock some of the smugness out of Ace 'cause, damn, but that boy has some smugness in him.

Date: 2006-04-05 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alita-b-angel.livejournal.com
Possibly, the best distraction from work ever.

And you know, for some reason I read 'desk' instead of 'bed' and went *BOOM* Yes, Ace should totally do that all over Smoker's desk while he's all grittng his teeth, hard as a rock and futilely trying to concentrate on his report. Ace would imprint himself on Smoker's desk FOREVER with tiny, finger shaped singe marks, just so Smoker will never be able to concentrate again.

And then I read it again and saw "bed" and went *BOOOMx2* because BED. Ngh. Ace would do it under the covers first just so Smoker has to slowly take NOTICE before baring himself in all his naked writhing glory to Smoker's eyes. The bed would rock slightly and with each rolling motion Smoker would know EXACTLY what Ace was doing to himself and his internal justice-o-metre will plummet like a hot potato.

MMM.

Date: 2006-04-05 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paxnirvana.livejournal.com
*is puddle of fangirly goo* Oh. Wickedly delicious.

Date: 2006-04-05 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampire-otaku.livejournal.com
Ace=Sex. That's all there is to it.

Wow. I think my mind has gone BOOM as well...

Date: 2006-05-01 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arnavon-san.livejournal.com
Mrow. And then some.

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