Attack of the Mindless Silly Drabble

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Title: Errors in Youthful Exploration
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 170
Pairing: Luffy/Usopp, features Zoro & Nami
Theme: Talking


Ha ha, man, I spend so much effort trying not to write like this, when commanded to, I completely fail.



"Ow. Ow. OW. .... I said OW Luffy!"

"I knowwww. I heard."

"You should stop when I say ow! Ow means stop!"

"But you didn't say 'stop'! Zoro says 'ow' when he means 'more'!"

"I'm not Zoro!!"

"What the hell are you two doing? Luffy, you killing Usopp? Be quiet about it, people are trying to sleep in here."

"Sorry, Zoro, we'll be done soon!"

"If you mean done killing me, yeah, we will, and--OW stop that!!"

"I didn't do anything!"

"Quit whining, Usopp. You're not gonna die. You're barely even bleeding."

"Oh my GOD! I'm bleeding!"

"Pssht, I've had nosebleeds worse than that."

"I'm bleeding! I'm bleeding! I never thought it would end like THIS! I can see a light at the end of a tunnel--"

"Oh no, I killed Usopp! Usopp! Hang on! Don't die!!"

"Unless all you stupid boys want to be bleeding, shut the hell up in there!!"

"... sorry, Nami."

"Stupid witch."

"I HEARD that."

Comments

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

"Quit whining, Usopp. You're not gonna die. You're barely even bleeding."

He's just the most caring captain EVER! I'd say something more constructive and appreciative, but the whole notion of masochist!Zoro had killed my brain.

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Ha ha, actually, that line was supposed to be Zoro. Luffy was more the "Oh no, I killed Usopp!" fellow.

It's a little confusing to have so many voices without any indications, though...

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

Ah, yes, that would be me being stupid. Can I hold up my 'I have a cold and my brain is clogged with mucus' placard in my defence? Rereading it, it's perfectly obvious who is speaking. I just melted at the idea of Zoro saying "Ow, fuck, that hurts, no don't fucking stop, do it harder, yeah, use your teeth!"

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

XD; I'm mostly just glad someone commented.

Thank you for reading! And... mmm. Masochistic Zoro.

[ptps.livejournal.com]

OMG ROFL WIN XDDDD Those boys are so stupidly lovable!!! XD SQUEE you win for this totally ahahaha XD ♥

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[mango-32.livejournal.com]

"Stupid witch."

"I HEARD that."

Bwahahahaha!!*Bursts out laughing at this.*

I love your dialoges.^___^

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Thank you! ^^

[monimonika.livejournal.com]

"I'm bleeding! I'm bleeding! I never thought it would end like THIS! I can see a light at the end of a tunnel--"

You've captured Usopp dead-on! Although I do admit that I at first associated the "Quit whining, Usopp..." line to Luffy, too. Other than that glitch, *applause*.

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

I'm... I'm not sure how anyone thought that was Luffy, though. The line before that, "I didn't do anything!" is clearly Luffy in context, so how could the following line also be Luffy? Plus it doesn't make any sense for his character...

Hmm. I'm just confused by it. Do people think Luffy tells Usopp not to whine? @_@;