Holy crap I'm still here?

[neo-queen157.livejournal.com]

Suffered a bit of blockage these past couple of weeks but I found a tiny bunny today. He might not be much but I luff him. :3

Title: Dinner
Rating: PG
Word Count: 245
Pairing: Just a tiny bit of ZoLu
Topic: Talking


With the dinner on the table, the sounds of wood scraping on wood, the clinking of silverware and the smell of spices fill the air. It's time for dinner on the Going Merry.

"Sanji! More meat please!"
"What? I just set your plate down!"
"Oh, Navigator-san, pass the salt please?"
"Zooro..."
"Here you go Rob--hey Usopp get your dirty shoes off the table!"
"Bastard. What do you think this is, a farm?"
"Zoooroo..."
"Sorry sorry! I'm doing another experiment..."
"Well keep your shitty experiments away from the table."
"Cook-san this steak is sublime."
"It's not shitty. I'm testing my new razor boots! They can cut through anything!"
"Zooooroooo..."
"ANYTHING?! That is so cool! Do you think it could cut through the table?"
"Ah! Robin-chwan! Do you really think so? I made it with the finest spices to compliment your refined palate."
"Of course they could! They could even cut diamonds!"
"DIAMONDS?!"
"Luffy cut it out."
"Actually, long-nose-kun, diamonds can only be cut by other diamonds."
"I know! These blades are lined with diamond shards--specially cut."
"Really? How did you go about--"
"GODDAMMIT LUFFY WOULD YOU GET YOUR HANDS OUT OF MY PANTS?! I'm trying to eat!"
Clatter. Rustle. Cough.
"Wait a minute... Usopp--where did you get diamonds? Don't tell me..."
"Bastard, if you were in Nami-swan's bedroom..."
"Ah! Luffy! Help me! ...Luffy? Luffy!"
"You know you like it, Zoro..."
"Ahh! LUFFY!"
"... shut up... and go help Usopp before Nami kills him, would you?"

Comments

[mango-32.livejournal.com]

"GODDAMMIT LUFFY WOULD YOU GET YOUR HANDS OUT OF MY PANTS?! I'm trying to eat!"
Hahahaha!! (Who's this? Zoro? *giggles*)

"You know you like it, Zoro..."
Now I can be sure it's Zoro.XD

I love this, typical Going Merry meal time.^___^Noisy, and hilarious too.

[monimonika.livejournal.com]

Heh heh heh... Very nicely written and very clear on who spoke what (with all seven crew members no less!). Now that's a feat! *applauds*

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

Got to agree with the comment above; you captured their voices perfectly, it was really easy to tell who was saying what. And was so cute, with Sanji's fawning and Usopp's lies and Robin's manners and Luffy being so ... Luffyish. Very sweet and very funny.