'While Your Cooking'

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Title:While Your Cooking
Rating:PG (13)for language
Word count:137
Pairing:ZoSan
Topic:none
Disclaimer:One piece is not mine

First time I've ever had where other people read something I wrote so please if I do something wrong tell (or yell at) me.

"Stop."
"Damn Marimo did you hear me I said stop."
"stop what?"
"Your a jack ass."
"So I've heard."
"Damn it Zoro"
"What?"
"Stop!"
"Stop what?"
An annoyed sigh from Sanji.
"Do you want a foot up your ass."
"Not particularly."
"Zoro STOP!"
"..."
"Zoro stop, why are you smiling like that it's weird stop."
"Ow, damn cook what was that for?"
"I told you to stop."
"Ow, shitty cook"
"Maybe," kicks Zoro "this will teach you to keep your hands to yourself while I'm cooking."
Zoro rubs his head and takes a step back.
"While your cooking."
Sanji looks slightly confused by that statement but a second later realization hits.
"No, wait let me rephrase that."
Zoro makes his way to the door.
"No, No I heard you clearly I won't bother you 'while your cooking'."
Zoro quickly leaves.
"Zoro, no, I meant keep your hands to yourself period, Zoro!"
THE END
Well what do you think (braces self)

Comments

[mango-32.livejournal.com]

"Cut, please."
*agrees*

'while your cooking'...um...to tell you the truth, I didn't really get it.
But I like the way this went.^____^

[ptps.livejournal.com]

Slightly confusing in the beginning, but hehe, conniving Zoro XD He's gonna bother Sanji nonstop when he's "not cooking" lolol

But yes, please use an LJ-cut. If you're not sure how to, check the FAQ.

[bulastar.livejournal.com]

Also, it's better to do a spelling/grammar check before you post. :)

Sorry

[ispreckin.livejournal.com]

I didn't know about the lj cut, sorry it took so long this computer is really slow and the good one is broken. (But I guess that makes it the bad one)

Re: Sorry

[ptps.livejournal.com]

Well maybe you could try reading the community rules first...