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Jun. 16th, 2006 09:48 pm
[identity profile] kanthia.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Kanthia is back from bananaland.

Title: Young Blood
Rating: PG for Pretty Great.
Word Count: 299
Pairing: Super speshul secret! Whoo!
Topic: Edges
A/N: The idea came to Kanthia this morning, when she started wondering who Zoro feared, and who had the power to do interesting things to him.


--

I think I like you, boy.

You’re nineteen years young- the youngest fool to ever wield me. Not naïve enough, not mature enough, but just somewhere in the middle. A good young fool with the skills to back it up.

Normally I wouldn’t pick blood as young as yours, but I was damn bored waiting for someone to come along anyways. They say you can’t kill the devil but by boring him- you intrigued me, let’s say, so I let you have me. I chose you, boy.

There are things you learn when nobody realizes there’s ears around. I know all about you...not just from you, but from my two new partners in crime, let’s say. Both quite female. You never seemed to be one to surround yourself with women, boy, but then again who would know but myself?

The white one, virgin as snow- she’s been with you a while, hasn’t she. She knows everything about you; all two thousand and two of your losses, and how she only lost one of them by your side. All your weaknesses, boy. She taunts you in your sleep, doesn’t she? There’s a girl in that blade, boy. And she loves you. As much as you intrigue me.

I want to see how far you take me. You have big dreams, boy. I’ll take you to those heights. Just give me my blood. I’ll make them all bleed so long as you point me the right way. But you should remember that the blood of petty imbeciles has never appeased me.

I think I like you, boy. I want to see how far you take me. Once you have your dreams, I’ll kill you and have your blood all to myself. Fair trade. A sword’s edge cuts both ways, hm?

--

- o m a k e -

"Zoro," said Luffy, "I think your swords are talking to one another again."
"Mm." Zoro lazily opened one eye. "Wouldja move Kitetsu away from Wadou? He's almost as much of a pervert as the Ero-cook."

--


~Kanthia

Date: 2006-06-17 03:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
XD I love the way Kitetsu seems so devious and is talking about killing Zoro when his quest is over, but then in the omake Zoro just shrugs him off as a pervert.

I like the voice and personality you gave Kitetsu overall and the line: "Not naïve enough, not mature enough" in reference to Zoro, it suits him.

Date: 2006-06-17 07:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Hahah what about the other sword??

Date: 2006-06-17 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noodle6680.livejournal.com
Hahaha. Ero-sword!

Date: 2006-06-17 02:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-shy-wolf.livejournal.com
Great drabble intresting I loved how you talked about the swords I always like drabbles about Zoro's swords and then came this line...

"Wouldja move Kitetsu away from Wadou? He's almost as much of a pervert as the Ero-cook."

You win. XD

Date: 2006-06-17 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystal-chan.livejournal.com
Ohhh, very nice Kanthia-chan! I always love drabbles about Zoro's swords, and you gave Kitetsu a very interesting personality. The bit of how he observes the other swords as female and is all like "You never seemed like one to surround yourself with women", heh. I like the last line about him killing Zoro once it's all over...but he better not! *shakes fist*

XD Also, the omake wins. Stupid Ero-sword.

Date: 2006-06-17 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
Hur hur hur, the omake.. adorable. XD

Date: 2006-06-17 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bumpgrrl.livejournal.com
that rocked. I agree, great voice/personality you attributed to kitetsu - and I'd love to see a sequel drabble with Yubashiri/Sanji tea! nudges

Date: 2006-06-18 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakurazuka-jae.livejournal.com
Excellent! Loved the Kitetsu personality and his relationship with Zoro.

Date: 2006-06-28 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ybmc.livejournal.com
This ficlet rocked. I was hoping someone would do something about that sword since Zoro's Enbima yonezu onigiri.

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