[identity profile] talanokomis.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Of Cats and Kittens. (... I need to think of a better one.)
Rating: pg-15 .. R-ish? I'm not quite sure.
Word Count: 218
Topic: Dexterity
A/N: I apologise beforehand if this sucks. And not in the good way, either.
Disclaimers: Sooooo not mine.
Pairing: Implied Zoro/Sanji. Implied Smoker/Ace.

And.


You remind me of a cat.

Not a fluffy, hissing kitten like your cook. Always willing to unsheathe his claws over the smallest of things.

Perhaps it's the way your eyes narrow slightly when you've found your prey. The way you ready yourself, bandanna loosened from your arm. Followed by flashing curves of silver as you strike, landing on your feet.

Or perhaps it's the way you hiss at me for leaving marks on you, which I can't leave on him.

The way you arch your back and smile, drawing me closer, before teeth clamp around the curve of my shoulder, tongue flicking against the indention above my collarbone - holding me in place as you shudder beneath me.

The soft rumbling noise you make when I slide free, licking gently at the wound you caused. That I allowed, never forget that. And when I kiss you again, the faintest taste of my own blood mingles with the rum we shared earlier and hidden far more underneath, cheap nicotine.

You two share a thing in common, however. A love of being petted.

And I don’t leave until the almost purring noises you make sound more like soft snores.

A last glimpse is always taken however, of you sprawled amongst the sheets, claiming the bed as your private kingdom.




For those wondering, Zoro is being compared to a tiger.

Date: 2006-06-23 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
Mmmmmmmm, I feel like purring myself. I lo~ve the comparison of Zoro to a big powerful hunting cat. ...Zoro ...sprawled on sheets ...mmmmm, and the biting... *eyes glaze over for a while*

I also liked the way Smoker mentions that Zoro wounded him but followed it immediately after with: "That I allowed, never forget that." XD

Of course Smoker, we'd never even try and suggest you can't handle this cat. *wishes she had this particular kitten to pet...*

Date: 2006-06-23 08:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pookiesbleubass.livejournal.com
Here kitty kitty kitty... *pulls out a bag of catnip* I hear big cats like tigers are more susceptible to catnips. :P
That said, great job! *g*

Date: 2006-06-23 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mango-32.livejournal.com
I love the way Zoro's being compared to a tiger.XDD And I especially liked this:
"You two share a thing in common, however. A love of being petted.

And I don’t leave until the almost purring noises you make sound more like soft snores."

So...sweet.^^

Date: 2006-06-23 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampire-otaku.livejournal.com
oOoOo... Zoro compared to a big tiger kitty who loves being petted. I really like ther concept you used for this one! It was yummy... :D

Date: 2006-06-24 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fieryredqueen.livejournal.com
the narrator is smoker? for some reason i thought it was Ace...does it even mention Ace? i'm confused...ah, well. it's about zoro, that much my remaining brain cells could figure out...

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