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[plotbunny-tiff.livejournal.com]

I'm angsty tonight.

Title: The Ugly Side
Pairing: Sanji/Usopp, implied Sanji~>Zoro
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 222
Topic: AU 

Here we are again, pasta and glasses of wine on the squishy loveseat in front of your stereo. The food is perfect, as always, and the wine and warmth of your body cuddled behind mine is exactly what you know I need after a long day of drudgery. It’s everything I always dreamed of those lonely nights curled up alone in my cold, empty bed.

 

And I hate it.

 

Isn’t that messed up? I’m living my dream romance, and still I wish…I wish…

 

I wish you’d make love to me like you hate me.

 

Do you have any idea how sexy you are when you’re mad? Not irritated, like one of your sous-chefs can’t tell the difference between ‘Cajun’ and ‘burnt’. I mean spit in your face, vein-pulsing enraged.

 

The way you get when you fight with him.

 

I know you love me. You tell me everyday: you whisper it sweetly in my hair in the morning and trill it gently against my chest at night.

 

But sometimes I think I bore you. It kills me, because I know I don’t deserve you, and I’m insecure enough to do anything to keep you. So snarl your obsinities while you pull my hair, scream your fury against my belly.

 

I’m greedy. I want all of you, not just the pretty mask.

Comments

[nakagaii.livejournal.com]

this is exactly where, in my head, the complexities of a sanji-usopp relationship would lie. exactly--on. the. dot.

[ptps.livejournal.com]

Do you have any idea how sexy you are when you’re mad?

Sanji: *confused blink* No.

It's true though. Poor Usopp. ;__;

[velutfortuna.livejournal.com]

Amazing. Pure, dark loveliness.

[yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com]

This might be my favorite Sanji/Usopp drabble to date. I like the complexities you brought into their relationship and I'd never considered how Usopp might feel about having only the softer side of Sanji when he knows there's so much more there.

"I’m greedy. I want all of you, not just the pretty mask."

Good line and good relationship point. Also... I like the thought of Sanji trilling. It makes me happy. ^_^

[vampire-otaku.livejournal.com]

Wow. This was an amazing take on their relationship, and I love it to death. The last line especially killed. Wonderfully dark and satisfying.

[rose-n-steel.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the touching fic...Love to see Ussop developed more!>.

[mishagirl.livejournal.com]

This was awesome! I agree the last line is pure gold!~