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Title: Self-Control
Rating: R
Pairing: Mihawk/Sanji, Zoro/Sanji optional
Topic: Shichibukai/Villians
Word Count: 299 (first time under 300 and that I haven’t had to drastically cut a drabble, woohoo!)
Notes: Inspired by rab_rumrunner’s drabble, even though it isn’t really a sequel...

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This was taking more self-restraint than even Zoro thought he possessed, but all he could feel was shame for his display of control.
 
Zoro’s one acknowledged superior had commanded him to kneel silently no matter what followed.  Earlier Mihawk had questioned his control and self-mastery as a swordsman, which of course left him no choice but to angrily pronounce that he could take anything the legendary swordsman might subject him too.
 
He was beginning to think he had been wrong.
 
Each time those eyes twitched even more tightly closed it felt like betrayal.
 
Every time he saw those powerful legs jerk weakly behind the inhuman sword pressed sharply against them.  Every time Zoro forced himself to look up at that face and saw a curly eyebrow drawn down sharply in something more than the usual irritation, something that looked closer to panic than anything he should ever see on that shitty-cook’s face...
 
Every time he saw the teeth of a hard-eyed shichibukai bite down sharply on the pale neck twisted awkwardly to one side, or saw one strong calloused hand kneed flesh it shouldn’t be touching he felt something inside him twist.  Painfully.
 
Zoro quivered with the restrained urge to yell, lunge, slash, to do anything and everything it took to get one of his nakama out of danger, out of a situation that was obviously causing them pain.
 
Instead he knelt quietly.  He had been promised lessons from a master, promised secrets only one swordsman on the planet knew, promised another duel... if he could pass a test of self-restraint.  He had also been promised none of his nakama would be physically hurt during this test.
 
It wasn’t enough.
 
….

 
Damn that shitty fucking love-cook bastard for sneaking out here after him, because Zoro's self control was near snapping.

Date: 2006-08-05 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kingyo-hanabi.livejournal.com
Oh wow...that last line left me breathless.

I want to read it. I want to see him snap.
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Date: 2006-08-05 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rab-rumrunner.livejournal.com
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Do iiiiiitttttttt! Please! ;___;
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Date: 2006-08-06 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rab-rumrunner.livejournal.com
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

"I," he announced, and Zoro really didn't want to see it but Mihawk was blushing a little beneath those fancy whiskers, "I am going to retire. And I think I'll be keeping him."

I wonder if he'd wind up giving Sanji back to Zoro after a few weeks, because he was such a handful. Or offer to let Zoro tag along. But then again, even if you'd have to fight a good hour before getting to the actual sex, it would be great sex, and he could cook for you.

Blushing? Awwwww someone has a crush.

(Good God, I wish I had half as your talent as a writer fyi. Even you crack, ooc joke stuff is brilliant)

as the romantic strum of Spanish guitars started filling the air.

...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Date: 2006-08-07 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geuna.livejournal.com
AAAAHAHAHAHAHA!!! YOU ARE AWESOME!!! MY FAVORITE ALL-MALE OP3 EVER!!! ^___^ The other is NamixZoroxSanji... and then all female would be NamixRobinx'Robin's hands' (CACKLES)

Date: 2006-08-07 07:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geuna.livejournal.com
^_^' Sorry! Wrote that all weird. I meant I have an all male OP3, an all female OP3, and a male and female OP3. ^_^' Though MihawkxZoroxSanji is totally tied with AcexZoroxSanji... and there are my OP4's, SmokerxAcexZoroxSanji and NamixZoroxRobinxSanji... And of course the “Giant Strawhat Orgy” ‘pairing’… *__* Okay a series like this could have such fun pairings.

Though you know what would be one of the most f-ed up pairings ever...? Bon-ClayxGinxSanji... 0__o Like beauty and the beast but with two beasts and the beauty is a guy who is more "pretty" than "beautiful".

Date: 2006-08-07 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geuna.livejournal.com
Wow, that was total and utter Geuna brain spamage...

Date: 2006-08-07 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] geuna.livejournal.com
(cuddles) I lurve yooooou!!!

Date: 2006-08-07 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vejiicakes.livejournal.com
Bweeeeee that's so awesome! In the sense that Zoro's being a training-obsessed jerk yet again while Sanji's under attack by a member of the Shichibukai, helping cement the idea that all OP antagonists/villains/somethings want to molest Sanji X3

Heh, heh heh.. that was neat XD

Date: 2007-05-05 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salmon-pink.livejournal.com
Mihawk, you wonderfully dirty bastard!

Date: 2008-09-21 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mishagirl.livejournal.com
AWW...Zoro!

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