[identity profile] bronzetigress.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Seeing in Colour
Topic: Time
Word Count: 200
Rating: G, I think
Pairing: beginning San/Zo? or nakamaship, I suppose
Disclaimer: Not mine. Probably just as well. Here, have them back...
Summary: It's about the journey, not the destination.

Excuse: New LJ-account, new community, new poster, even a new fandom. Be glad I've written before! ;)

And... It's not the drabble I originally wanted to write for this topic. Sanji insisted, however, and wouldn't leave me alone until I did. His POV.

~~~

Don't know when it happened.

Somewhere along the Line, all those pieces of Blue started blending together. All Blue became not so much a dream as a memory, of all the places we've been and all the things we've seen. Together.

Every new sea had its accompanying rainbow. Luffy's bold red ribbon and golden straw crown. Nami-swan's fiery orange locks. Ussop's quavering brown knees, Chopper's bouncing pink hat, the sombre purple glinting from Robin's hair. And green. Green was always a good sign. As long as I could see your stupid green head somewhere, I knew all was well.

This morning we found it. The real thing.

Nami-swan shouted for me. Luffy babbled excitedly while Chopper squeaked at Usopp's boastful proclamations. Even Robin raised soft-voiced words of wonderment, as they all rushed for the rail.

My dream.

It was oddly anticlimactic.

Until you stepped up behind me, put a light hand on my shoulder, and murmured, "About time, huh?" in my other ear.

You must've jumped a foot off the deck when I laid my hand over yours to keep you there, but I leaned back anyway, until there was green in the corner of my vision. "Yeah. About time."

Date: 2006-08-16 02:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
Love the last paragraph. It's so tender, a pleasure to read!!!

Date: 2006-08-16 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
This is lovely. The mood, the finding of his goal, Sanji’s whole attitude... I like this take on it.

And I’m a total sucker for this concept: “Somewhere along the Line, all those pieces of Blue started blending together. All Blue became not so much a dream as a memory, of all the places we've been and all the things we've seen. Together.” And the last paragraph = love. The thought of Sanji leaning back until he can see green... mmmm. Pure understated happy.

Date: 2006-08-16 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vampire-otaku.livejournal.com
Until you stepped up behind me, put a light hand on my shoulder, and murmured, "About time, huh?" in my other ear. Awwwww... It's so freakin' cute...

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