[identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] onepieceyaoi100
Title: Shape of My Heart (limericks!!)
Rating: PG-13 (for potty mouth!)
Word Count: 97, if Word is not mistaken
Pairing: Zo/San
Topic: Song lyrics


A swordsman quite manly and strong,
Knew that loving a guy was 'real wrong'.
So with terror and rage,
On his heart war he'd wage,
For a cook he would not let it long.

But love nagged and called him a goof,
So one day he cried out from the roof:
"I have a confession:
My heart's your possession!"
And ripped out his organ as proof.

"The fuck are you doing, you ape?!"
The cook asked him, mouth all agape.
"Shut'cher face, stupid dong,
it was all in a song!
I wanted to show you its shape."

I'M SORRY.


And here is [the horrid song in question that inspired this tragedy]... orz

Mmm, yeah, yeah

Baby, please try to forgive me
Stay here
Don't put out the glow
Hold me now
Don't bother
If every minute it makes me weaker
You can save me from the man that I've become
Oh yeah

CHORUS:
Lookin' back on the things I've done
I was tryin' to be someone
I played my part
And kept you in the dark
Now let me show you the shape of my heart


Sadness is beautiful
Loneliness is tragical
So help me
I can't win this war oh, no
Touch me now
Don't bother
If every second it makes me weaker
You can save me
From the man I've become (ohhh)

CHORUS:
Lookin' back on the things I've done (girl and my girl)
I was tryin' to be someone (tryin' to be somone)
I played my part (ohhh)
And kept you in the dark (baby girl)
Now let me show you the shape of my heart


BRIDGE:
I'm here
With my confession
Got nothing to hide no more
I don't know where to start
But to show you
The shape of my heart


I'm lookin' back
On things I've done
I never wanna play the same old part (ohhh)
Or keep you in the dark (keep you in the dark)
Now let me show you the shape of my heart


CHORUS:
Lookin' back on the things I've done (ohhh)
I was tryin' to be someone (tryin' to be someone)
I played my part (ohhh)
And kept you in the dark (ohhh)
Now let me show you (now let me show you the)
The shape of my heart (shape, shape of my heart)


Lookin' back on the things I've done (ohhh)
I was tryin' to be someone
I played my part (ohhh)
And kept you in the dark (ohhh)
Now let me show you the shape of

Show you the shape of my heart

Date: 2006-09-29 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shuraiya.livejournal.com
...oh my shit,.glhkjg

Date: 2006-09-29 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peroxidepest17.livejournal.com
HAHAHA BACKSTREET BOYS ARE LOVE.

AND FUCK ZORO WHAT A CUTE IDIOT DUMBASS. XD

Date: 2006-09-29 10:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-09-29 10:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siedhr.livejournal.com
O_O
I love Sting. Though it doesn't make me think of Zoro and Sanji at all. For me that song would be The Devil Went Down to Georgia.

Date: 2006-09-29 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hypnosprostatis.livejournal.com
O.O;; The Devil Went Down to Georgia!?!? How..wha.. What the heck!? ::sits and wracks brain to see the ZxS of the song:: @.@;

Date: 2006-09-29 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siedhr.livejournal.com
I kinda always saw them as the intense type (at least that's how Kaja portrays them). And that song is intense. http://youtube.com/watch?v=2HJp0gd7wmg If you check this out, at the end there are the Coyote Girls dancing on top of the bar. I totally see them doing the same thing. Well, maybe only Sanji and Zoro watching.

Date: 2006-09-30 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hypnosprostatis.livejournal.com
Hmm.. Sanji-footwork, maybe, but it still hurts to get in your head! Haha!

Date: 2006-09-30 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fieryredqueen.livejournal.com
that wasn't the Sting song!!! the sting song is actually good. that was the horrendous backstreet boys.

Date: 2006-09-30 10:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siedhr.livejournal.com
Gah, I fail. "hangs head in shame" How could I have confounded Sting with the BB is beyond me.

Date: 2006-09-30 10:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siedhr.livejournal.com
Yah, sorry. It was late. And I saw the shape of my heart and I thought Sting for some reason.

Date: 2006-09-29 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gipped.livejournal.com
BLEEDINGHEART BLEEDINGHEART. ♥
Idk.
This made me smile <3 and shit son, i love your limericks c;

Date: 2006-09-29 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
...you bring me such joy.

And your limerick talent stuns me.

Date: 2006-09-29 10:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rab-rumrunner.livejournal.com
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh God, the Backstreet Boys! That brings back crazy memories from Middle School.

Good God Zoro/Sanji and the Backstreet Boys. :P

Date: 2006-09-30 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fieryredqueen.livejournal.com
such flawless rhythm in your limericks. and hilarity. mah-velous.

Date: 2006-09-30 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fieryredqueen.livejournal.com
and i must admit, the first time i read 'he ripped out his organ as proof' i thought he meant his...organ. you know, penis-organ. (that would've been proof too!)

Date: 2006-09-30 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madnesshp.livejournal.com
XDD Same here!!! I had to do a double-take.

Date: 2006-09-30 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuitari4pwnage.livejournal.com
Classic! THe shape of my heart, haha. Zoro needs someone to save him from himself.

Date: 2006-10-01 04:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuitari4pwnage.livejournal.com
PUNS ARE AWESOME, I LOVE PUNS! But there are so very good ones, so I pat you on the back for writing one!

*patback*

Stop being dumb, Zoro ... ;_;.

Date: 2006-10-01 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuitari4pwnage.livejournal.com
So few* very good ones, etc etc.

Goddamnit.

Date: 2006-09-30 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ptps.livejournal.com
xryfklxctulfaeatistdhADSTJ OMGGGGGG WHAT THE FUCK WHATT HE FUK WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKK RIPPED OUT HIS HEARTY OOM GETUW45THAGOOMG FUCL WIN

Date: 2006-09-30 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ptps.livejournal.com
AND OMGAEDTJA BACKSTREET BOYS WTF YOU WINNNNNNNNN

Date: 2006-09-30 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuroi-hemlock.livejournal.com
At first I thought this was the Sting song and I was happy 'YAY, I like that song!!'; then I found out that it was the Backstreet Boys song and I was, 'HUH?? When did they cover a Sting song?'. Then I realized it was a different song with the same name and I forget (or rather blocked) the song from my memory. XDXDXD

Anyways, it was a great limerick, a tad bit odd, with Zoro ripping out his heart....but I think the rhyming was great. ^^ 150/10. That boy needs a reality check...pronto.

Date: 2006-10-02 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kuroi-hemlock.livejournal.com
Yes, Zoro is weird. Especially when he thinks that cutting his trapped feet off will free him and expects to run after the so-called 'bad guys'. You have no FEET, how can you RUN?

That boy needs to think things through, he can be worse than Luffy at times and don't get me started on his directionally challenged sense of direction...actually I have no right to comment on that I can be bad myself at times with directions.

Anyone who has the courage to write Zoro like what you did and rhyme it too deserves a high score.

Date: 2006-09-30 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arelente2.livejournal.com
OMFGawsh!!!!!! that was something!!!!!!!

a;skldfjs'dk;fmsdnmaodv +insert horrendous laughs here+
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ps: i'll steal download the song

Date: 2006-10-01 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dried-frog-pill.livejournal.com
I'M SORRY.
NO YOU'RE NOT. AND YOU BETTER NOT BE, BECAUSE THIS WAS FANTASTIC CRAZY CRACK

YOU'RE MY HEEEEERO! ♥ AND YOUR MAD LIMERICK TALENT KNOWS NO BOUNDS. AND ZORO!LOGIC WIIIIIINS IN ALL THE WRONG WAYS
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