My very first entry ever!
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onepieceyaoi100I'm such a huge lurker and I finally decided to do something. So I tried to plunk out a little drabble under 300 words.
How the HELL do you guys pull it off so easily?! Words cannot describe how frustrating it was to write something under 300 words. XD You guys have some serious talent.
So..er.. here's my little lame entry for the whole Pain thingie.
Title: Ouchies!
Rating: G, Zoro/Chopper ness with an appearance by Sanji to make up for the crappiness of it all!
Words: 300 EXACTLY.
"Ow, that HURTS!" Chopper squealed, flaying his limbs wildly. Zoro gritted his teeth and held on tighter to the squirming bundle of fur, mindful of the little one's sharp hooves.
"Just hold still, will ya?! Jeez, it's not as if I'm TRYING to hurt you!" he growled, moving in with the tweezers to grasp at something burrowed in Chopper's fur. The reindeer let out another sharp yelp and thrashed violently, nearly causing the swordsman to loose his grip.
"ZORO!!"
"OK, OK, shut up, dammit, this is the last one!" A sharp, forceful tug and the last swollen tick pulled free from Chopper's skin. Zoro dropped both parasite and tweezers into a nearby cup before finally loosening his death grip on a wobbly, teary eyed Chopper. "Finished."
Chopper whimpered and craned his head around to peer over his shoulder, just to make sure. He froze, eyes going wide in shock.
"My FUR!!" he exclaimed. Where Zoro had tugged the ticks off of his back, he'd ripped out very large chunks of Chopper's fur with them, leaving behind irritated red skin. Chopper stared accusingly up at Zoro, who managed to appear somewhat sheepish.
"You can't really tell all that much, ya know?" the swordsman mumbled, giving Chopper a brief, reassuring squeeze. "It's not that noticable."
"I look like a moldy shag rug!"
And to make up for a lack of plot, Sanji strolled by lazily, hands shoved deep into his pockets. "Oi, izzat you Chopper? Where's the--"
There was a brief moment of silence as Sanji stared at Chopper, cigarette dangling limply from his lips. And he doubled over in hysterical laughter.
Zoro glared daggers at Sanji as Chopper let out an embarrased groan and buried his face into the swordsman's chest. "Oi, shut up!" he snarled at the cook, covering Chopper's back with his arms protectively. "S'not his fault, dammit!"
How the HELL do you guys pull it off so easily?! Words cannot describe how frustrating it was to write something under 300 words. XD You guys have some serious talent.
So..er.. here's my little lame entry for the whole Pain thingie.
Title: Ouchies!
Rating: G, Zoro/Chopper ness with an appearance by Sanji to make up for the crappiness of it all!
Words: 300 EXACTLY.
"Ow, that HURTS!" Chopper squealed, flaying his limbs wildly. Zoro gritted his teeth and held on tighter to the squirming bundle of fur, mindful of the little one's sharp hooves.
"Just hold still, will ya?! Jeez, it's not as if I'm TRYING to hurt you!" he growled, moving in with the tweezers to grasp at something burrowed in Chopper's fur. The reindeer let out another sharp yelp and thrashed violently, nearly causing the swordsman to loose his grip.
"ZORO!!"
"OK, OK, shut up, dammit, this is the last one!" A sharp, forceful tug and the last swollen tick pulled free from Chopper's skin. Zoro dropped both parasite and tweezers into a nearby cup before finally loosening his death grip on a wobbly, teary eyed Chopper. "Finished."
Chopper whimpered and craned his head around to peer over his shoulder, just to make sure. He froze, eyes going wide in shock.
"My FUR!!" he exclaimed. Where Zoro had tugged the ticks off of his back, he'd ripped out very large chunks of Chopper's fur with them, leaving behind irritated red skin. Chopper stared accusingly up at Zoro, who managed to appear somewhat sheepish.
"You can't really tell all that much, ya know?" the swordsman mumbled, giving Chopper a brief, reassuring squeeze. "It's not that noticable."
"I look like a moldy shag rug!"
And to make up for a lack of plot, Sanji strolled by lazily, hands shoved deep into his pockets. "Oi, izzat you Chopper? Where's the--"
There was a brief moment of silence as Sanji stared at Chopper, cigarette dangling limply from his lips. And he doubled over in hysterical laughter.
Zoro glared daggers at Sanji as Chopper let out an embarrased groan and buried his face into the swordsman's chest. "Oi, shut up!" he snarled at the cook, covering Chopper's back with his arms protectively. "S'not his fault, dammit!"
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