An actual contest entry!

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Title: Invasion Force
Words: 296
Rating: R
Warning: Non-con
Pairing: Sarquiss/Sanji
Theme: Wreaking Havok




The invasion had come overnight, Bellamy's ships surrounding the Baratie and sending its guests fleeing into the dark. Then Baratie's only customers were Bellamy's crew, a bunch of Grand Line pirates who slipped over the Calm Belt in boredom and after the rumour of fine cuisine as run by a legendary pirate.

Or crippled ex-pirate. Bellamy had declared Zeff's pathetic state a living example of the advance of the New Age, to his crew's amusement. Zeff had not said anything, and if Bellamy didn't realize that look was Zeff's acknowledgement of a fool, all the better.

Baratie had never been invaded by stronger pirates, only the pansy East Blue wannabes they always sent running. Bellamy's crew even paid for what they ate and drank, which kept Patty from running amuck.

The captain alone could scuttle Baratie in seconds with that damn power of his. As long as they kept their heads down, the locusts would get bored and move on, and everyone on Baratie could forget this ever happened.

Forget anything had happened.

Sanji ground his teeth painfully as the blue-haired first mate slammed into his hips again, one fist on Sanji's shoulder and one fist in Sanji's short hair for leverage.

"Come on, pretty cook, be more friendly." Sarquiss encouraged in Sanji's burning ears. A kukri slid out of its sheath, the tip pressed into the railing Sanji had been gripping tight enough to leave fingerprints. The blade eased down, resting over Sanji's precious fingers. "We don't want any accidents while we're on your nice boat, here, right?"

Half-blind from rage, Sanji began to shift back against Sarquiss, allowing the shitty pirate deeper. Sarquiss laughed at his efforts.

Comments

[ptps.livejournal.com]

...I keep having this sense of strong deja vu everytime I see you title a post with 'an actual contest entry!'. I've gotten it about five times already, but I can't remember whether it was your posts or not >>; Just... everytime. >>; And it feels like I've already read this before. Just... not. BUT YOU KNOW HOW DEJA VU FUCKS WITH YOUR MIND. RIGHT?

But ngh, Sarquiss is such a bastard. X__X; b

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

W-well... uh... XD; I don't post too often off topic, so probably a little me, a little other people? If it's Sanji rape, I think it's probably been done a million times, but I felt like random evil today. ^^; I haven't read Sarquiss/Sanji before, but I wouldn't be surprised if someone's done it.

[nuitari4pwnage.livejournal.com]

Wow, heartbreaking. It's a beautifully written scene. Poor Sanji. Lots of rape scenes are written so shittily. But yours is >_ob!

I love love love you for writing this.

When I first read the pairing, I was like, "Who the hell is Sarquiss... rings a bell but don't remember..."

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you... enjoyed is the wrong word. "Appreciated" it!

[plotbunny-tiff.livejournal.com]

You actually made me curl up in my chair a little. Then I wanted to cry.
That was a horrible, disgusting, and wretched scene that exposed the rotten underbelly of the OP world. It invokes too many negative emotions in me to feasibly list right now.

...

I applaude you. I give you a standing ovation, in fact. Your writing here is something I would use in a course as a stellar example of what good art is supposed to do: make the audience feel. You should be very proud.

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

*blush*

Wow. Thank you for this extremely kind response. I'm glad that I was able to evoke such strong feelings in you.

[meramerawolf242.livejournal.com]

......was sanji a kid or somethin when this happened?

[admiralnaismith.livejournal.com]

Eh? No. This would take place sometime before Luffy, I suppose. But since Sanji at this point hasn't had the strengthening influence of being with the Straw Hats, and since he couldn't have beaten Kreig's crew single-handed, and Bellamy has a bounty around three times Kreig's, I think it's reasonable that there's little he could have done at that point if Bellamy's crew (or a similarly bully-inclined crew) had landed.