Another night, another game...
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onepieceyaoi100Title: Give In
Topic: ... apparently, we're still between topics
Word Count: 300
Rating: R
Pairing: SanZo (explicitly in that order, despite appearances)
Disclaimer: Characters and setting? Not mine. Probably just as well. Here, have them back, before I draw any more inferences about 'em than I already have...
Summary: Sanji does not bottom. Period. This evening, Zoro will be working on the 'why' of it.
Excuse: None whatsoever. I'm tired and cranky and stuffy-headed and looking for something to write, and today, this is it. Just straight-up fade-to-black.
Notes: Same timeline as "Let Me". Flip side, some time later.
Warning: D/s, or 'Dominance and submission', as distinct from bondage. Head games, if you like (literally, too). If that bothers you, don't click. That is all.
~~~
Sanji didn't have trust issues. He trusted his nakama, all of them. Even the naked mosshead currently standing over him.
But he did have issues. Control issues.
He'd confess it easily enough. When stone drunk and pressed on the matter.
It was only fair that, after having worked through some of Zoro's trust issues, the idiot now had Sanji, all too literally, on his knees. At Zoro's feet. Zoro, who wasn't too happy with Sanji's glaring defiance.
Fine. Bastard wanted to run this show, let him. Gracelessly, Sanji arranged himself tensely in the position he'd been instructed to take.
The unmistakable sound of that jar being opened did little to relieve his anxiety. Neither did the thump of knees between his wide-spread calves, nor the slick, questing fingers on his bare inner thighs, sliding up over hard muscle to the base of his spine.
But.
This was Zoro. Whom he trusted enough to be here with.
And despite everything, Sanji soon found himself panting with need and, by his own agreement, unable to solve his own problem.
Zoro's voice, a steady litany of reassuring instructions and praises, and hands, rough calluses stroking obedience into sensitive flesh, became Sanji's everything. When those hands turned him onto his back, raised his knees and spread them wide, when that voice told him, "Stay," he fought, wide-eyed, against his fear to remember that trust. Stared searchingly into green eyes, and then... surrendered.
Afterward, as Zoro wiped his mouth and fingers, grinning smugly, Sanji could only stare at him in confusion. "But you didn't..."
A shrug. "Could've, and you'd have let me, but that's not what this was about, idiot. Besides, I'd rather keep your trust."
"But you still haven't..."
"We're not done yet."
Sanji opened his mouth to complain.
"Hold that pose."
Oh, shit.
Topic: ... apparently, we're still between topics
Word Count: 300
Rating: R
Pairing: SanZo (explicitly in that order, despite appearances)
Disclaimer: Characters and setting? Not mine. Probably just as well. Here, have them back, before I draw any more inferences about 'em than I already have...
Summary: Sanji does not bottom. Period. This evening, Zoro will be working on the 'why' of it.
Excuse: None whatsoever. I'm tired and cranky and stuffy-headed and looking for something to write, and today, this is it. Just straight-up fade-to-black.
Notes: Same timeline as "Let Me". Flip side, some time later.
Warning: D/s, or 'Dominance and submission', as distinct from bondage. Head games, if you like (literally, too). If that bothers you, don't click. That is all.
~~~
Sanji didn't have trust issues. He trusted his nakama, all of them. Even the naked mosshead currently standing over him.
But he did have issues. Control issues.
He'd confess it easily enough. When stone drunk and pressed on the matter.
It was only fair that, after having worked through some of Zoro's trust issues, the idiot now had Sanji, all too literally, on his knees. At Zoro's feet. Zoro, who wasn't too happy with Sanji's glaring defiance.
Fine. Bastard wanted to run this show, let him. Gracelessly, Sanji arranged himself tensely in the position he'd been instructed to take.
The unmistakable sound of that jar being opened did little to relieve his anxiety. Neither did the thump of knees between his wide-spread calves, nor the slick, questing fingers on his bare inner thighs, sliding up over hard muscle to the base of his spine.
But.
This was Zoro. Whom he trusted enough to be here with.
And despite everything, Sanji soon found himself panting with need and, by his own agreement, unable to solve his own problem.
Zoro's voice, a steady litany of reassuring instructions and praises, and hands, rough calluses stroking obedience into sensitive flesh, became Sanji's everything. When those hands turned him onto his back, raised his knees and spread them wide, when that voice told him, "Stay," he fought, wide-eyed, against his fear to remember that trust. Stared searchingly into green eyes, and then... surrendered.
Afterward, as Zoro wiped his mouth and fingers, grinning smugly, Sanji could only stare at him in confusion. "But you didn't..."
A shrug. "Could've, and you'd have let me, but that's not what this was about, idiot. Besides, I'd rather keep your trust."
"But you still haven't..."
"We're not done yet."
Sanji opened his mouth to complain.
"Hold that pose."
Oh, shit.
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from jeina
Date: 2006-11-26 03:37 am (UTC)omfg, this was an awesome followup to let me~ nice pacing lady. and the snark...oh, youve got a portal into their brains dontcha? the last 3 lines killed me. you are now being charged with 1st degree murder. >=)
Re: from jeina
Date: 2006-11-26 03:59 pm (UTC)*blinks* I'm a bit confused on how you figure that last hop, but that's nothing new. *shrugs* Glad you found this comm anyway, though, and especially glad you enjoyed this little piece.
As to a portal - not really. I find it pretty easy to climb into Zoro's headspace, and I'm reasonably familiar with the sort of play in these two drabbles, which probably helps a lot. Write what you know, know what you write, and all that.
And... *waves smelling salts under your nose* Can't have my reviewers dying on me, really. That'd be bad.
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Date: 2006-11-26 06:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-26 04:08 pm (UTC)considering I barely scraped through every English/writing course I ever took. *catches love and frames it*Also: Icon love!!!
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Date: 2006-11-26 08:02 am (UTC)the smutty, yummeh, very Very ImageryXD As usual, a great ficlet X3, I look forward to the next masterpiece, because thats what they are ^____^
Thanks for making the prospect of going to work a lot more pleasant!
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Date: 2006-11-26 04:12 pm (UTC)You're very welcome. The veryVeryImagery is such *fun* to write. :)
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Date: 2006-11-26 10:44 am (UTC)Hottest line in the history of fiction.
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Date: 2006-11-26 04:15 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-26 04:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-26 04:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-26 07:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-26 10:34 pm (UTC)I guess, this time, it's about respecting the boundaries, even when you've been given permission to cross them... ;)
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Date: 2006-11-26 10:50 pm (UTC)Sanji submitting and Zoro being gentle, it's so tasty...
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Date: 2006-11-27 01:25 am (UTC)*grins* Glad you enjoyed! :)
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Date: 2006-11-27 03:08 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-27 02:19 pm (UTC)yay-
Date: 2006-12-27 04:21 am (UTC)Re: yay-
Date: 2006-12-27 02:10 pm (UTC)(glad you liked!)