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Title: So Far Away
Topic: bad company
Word Count: 300
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sanji -> Zoro
Disclaimer: Characters and setting? Not mine. Probably just as well. Here, have them back...
Summary: Zoro had zoned out on him. Again. It made Sanji wonder...

Excuse: This is not the drabble you are looking for. Not only is it not sticking to the inspiration song I picked, it couldn't even stay with the same artist. *grumble*

Notes: I'm doing that flip-side series thing again. Someone swat me now. ;) This one goes with "Can't We Just".

~~~

Where did he go, Sanji wondered, when his eyes turned distant like that and his face took on that misted-over, ephemeral not-quite-glow? What, or whom, did the swordsman think of in those moments?

Whom, he thought. It looked like a 'whom' sort of expression. Wistfulness, longing, sorrow - those could be a place. The hopelessness, though, that was a person. Someone he wanted, and couldn't have.

It wasn't the ladies aboard the ship, that much was for certain. The vaguely disgusted snort, the mumbled "just nakama" was proof enough. It wasn't self-disgust. He'd seen that lip curl too often under Nami-san's attentions.

It wasn't the girl attached to the white sword, either. Kui-something? His hands had stayed where they were, hadn't moved to touch the hilt or grasp the scabbard. He did that a lot, sure, but there was a way that his hands moved, even in his sleep, when he thought of that girl. Sanji snorted as he stepped back into the galley. At first he'd thought the stroking motion Zoro used at those times had been a reflection of something else entirely, and had wondered, for some time, if the "girl" had been a boy instead, but no. Zoro always referred to the sword's ghost in the feminine. And it was definitely the sword that his hands caressed in his dreams; he did it awake as well, although not as often, and only when deep in thought.

But Sanji didn't know of any other girls it could be. Or boys, for that matter. Zoro didn't look at *anyone* the way he gazed at Sanji's knees in those rare moments when he zoned out in the middle of one of their verbal battles.

Pity, really. If he knew who he was in competition with, he might have more luck.

Date: 2006-12-01 09:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotszok.livejournal.com
ARGH, IT'S LIKE THEY'RE TRAINS RUNNING TOWARDS EACH OTHER, BUT ON DIFFERENT TRACKS DAMMIT. Genius Award for best pun of the year, please

Love these little series! ♥

Date: 2006-12-01 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orange-smaug.livejournal.com
::shakes fist at Kaja:: Bitch took my 'ships passing in the night' comment D:. I vote Nami shoves them in to a closet again :D.

Date: 2006-12-02 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheasa.livejournal.com
Yay! POV switch! I loved this one too, if not more than you other one. Again, the imagery is so cool. You rock!

(thanks for the e-mail!)

Date: 2006-12-02 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maldoror-gw.livejournal.com
Lol, that last line made me faceslap my keyboard. Oy vey...

Date: 2006-12-02 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
Oh how I love multiple POV's, These little mini-series hold a special place in my heart.

You must realize that to round this one out properly we need more. At the very least either Sanji's POV as Zoro wraps around his legs or Zoro POV when Sanji does something about it later.

...feel free to put as much extra stuff in there as you want. ^_____^ Nevertheless, I want conclusion! They're so damn close to a... maybe not a happy ending, but at least a happy beginning! I LOVE THE MOMENT OF 'HE LIKES ME' REALIZATION! I MUST HAVES IT!

Date: 2006-12-02 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuki-kokoro.livejournal.com
Ummm, yeah. Went and read the commentary for "Can't we just"... ^^;;

...I STILL WANT YOU TO CONTINUE BUT RECOGNIZE THAT IT IS LESS LIKELY NOW THAT THERE HASN'T ACTUALLY BEEN ANY OUTWARD INDICATION OF LIKING.

I'D STILL LIKE TO SEE MORE, HOWEVER.

Date: 2006-12-02 07:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] plotbunny-tiff.livejournal.com
I may have said this before, but you and your fic are so bad for me. You're like that last slice of lemon cheesecake in the fridge. You know you shouldn't eat it, it's rich and sugary and all sorts of not diet approved but you can still remember how mouth-watering and delicious the other slices were, and before you know it you're licking the last of the crumbs away and you still can't be properly ashamed...and where the hell am I going with this comment?

Perhaps to that "wistfulness" you mentioned in your drabble.

Date: 2006-12-02 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com
It's when Sanji catches Zoro's gaze drifting several inches to his crotch that Sanji finally clues in. It's then that Sanji should start wearing pants that have one of those funny slogans written across the front - much like those written across the chest of a womens t-shirts, it should read, if you can read this you have given me enough time to kick you in the head and blush like a school girl


X3 Delish, please miss, may I have some more? *holds up laptop for more beautifully written fics*

Date: 2006-12-02 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com
yes please! X3 LegGlomp!Zoro would be muchly appreciated!

Date: 2006-12-03 04:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
You're talking about the guy who has been seen wearing a shirt with the words "Love Cook" after all =_= <--has seen a joke comic where someone erased part of the second 'o' to make a 'c'

Date: 2006-12-03 01:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com
have you seen the avatar someone has of that?

Date: 2006-12-03 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
I think I may have, actually.

Date: 2006-12-03 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Don't forget the pants that only go to his knees and the loafers! ^.^

Date: 2006-12-03 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Mayhaps Zoro has a kink for Sanji's knees??

Date: 2006-12-03 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com
yes, to add to his long list of fetishes! X3 It goes right under the love cock cook one XD

Date: 2006-12-03 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Yes indeed. Zoro loves his...cook. ^.^

Date: 2006-12-03 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shymagical.livejournal.com
Oh, it probably started when his eyes got drawn in by the sparkly chain then things just went south from there.

Date: 2006-12-03 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com
"oooh, sparkly" *eyes drift downwards and sideways slightly* "ooooh, love cook"

*brain melts*

Date: 2006-12-05 04:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] interestinglive.livejournal.com
I swear there better be a follow-up where they hook-up! Gah you can't leae it like this!

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